
5/22/2014 c13 ThatOneDudeThatsWeird
I was thinking make jeff an omega leaving his family and everything because she gets with Keith. Like a family bring a pack and the dad being the alpha jeff gets hurt slowly becomes detached then becomes an omega later finding and making his own pack where he is the alpha. And this big thing of amy trying to find him.
I was thinking make jeff an omega leaving his family and everything because she gets with Keith. Like a family bring a pack and the dad being the alpha jeff gets hurt slowly becomes detached then becomes an omega later finding and making his own pack where he is the alpha. And this big thing of amy trying to find him.
5/28/2012 c10
1Charmedxx
Omg that totally stoked me o_o I've been reading your story for a while and I'm a poohead for not reviewing before xD your story is amazing! And interesting I hope Amy somehow figure things out with Jeff and Keith

Omg that totally stoked me o_o I've been reading your story for a while and I'm a poohead for not reviewing before xD your story is amazing! And interesting I hope Amy somehow figure things out with Jeff and Keith
5/24/2012 c9
6Carmel March
I'm glad you're back! Great chapter...I was so happy to see you updated :)

I'm glad you're back! Great chapter...I was so happy to see you updated :)
7/21/2010 c8
9Mysterious MD
Interesting story, it's good. This last chapter was kind of sad, but Keith did bring up a good point I thought. I only noticed a few spelling errors ("your" instead of "you're"), but nothing too big. Keep up the good work, I look forward to the next chapter.

Interesting story, it's good. This last chapter was kind of sad, but Keith did bring up a good point I thought. I only noticed a few spelling errors ("your" instead of "you're"), but nothing too big. Keep up the good work, I look forward to the next chapter.
2/20/2010 c6 smurf-love
i really like this story ill be looking for the next chapters to come
i really like this story ill be looking for the next chapters to come
7/1/2009 c2 Wendy Thompson135th
In the very ugly chapter one, I say that BOLD and UNDERLINED text is hard to read. The stupid censoring program replaced ha rd on with **.
In the very ugly chapter one, I say that BOLD and UNDERLINED text is hard to read. The stupid censoring program replaced ha rd on with **.
7/1/2009 c1 Wendy Thompson135th
Please, if you want people to read your stories, do not publish in bold and underline. It's hard on the reader. Italics do not help.
Please, if you want people to read your stories, do not publish in bold and underline. It's hard on the reader. Italics do not help.