for Blinded5/18/2009 c1 
6myforever
i like this a lot...
we should put that up on tha Panther Paws
haha like i said i love this ;)
6myforeveri like this a lot...
we should put that up on tha Panther Paws
haha like i said i love this ;)
4/30/2009 c1 21Antonella Marie
Very emotional. And I agree about the Romeo and Juliet thing. Though you might want to spellcheck the line that says "That if your in pain". It's supposed to be "you're" not "your". Just pointing that out but great poem though.
21Antonella MarieVery emotional. And I agree about the Romeo and Juliet thing. Though you might want to spellcheck the line that says "That if your in pain". It's supposed to be "you're" not "your". Just pointing that out but great poem though.