for My Guardian Angel3/10/2010 c4 
1Writer-Kelsey09
It's great, but the only thing is, I dislike how he wants to do it after he's raped. Normally, people would stay away from physical contact after that kind of thing.
1Writer-Kelsey09It's great, but the only thing is, I dislike how he wants to do it after he's raped. Normally, people would stay away from physical contact after that kind of thing.
9/23/2009 c4 Abandonedddd
It's very rare that a fiction makes me cry. Your's did! It's just really damn beautiful. I added you to my favourites and this story as well.
It's very rare that a fiction makes me cry. Your's did! It's just really damn beautiful. I added you to my favourites and this story as well.
6/20/2009 c2 xxBULLETxx
Haha, its awesome lol. Ive been reading your stuff ever since 'All I Have Left'
Please put that story back up! lol :)
-If you don't mind me asking, whats your name?
xx.Bianca
Haha, its awesome lol. Ive been reading your stuff ever since 'All I Have Left'
Please put that story back up! lol :)
-If you don't mind me asking, whats your name?
xx.Bianca
4/9/2009 c1 3SeveRemus
Um, I don't mean to flame, but you need help with your spelling and capitalization. Like, a lot. If you don't use a beta, you should. If you did already, find another.
I liked the story itself, but it would have helped for the guy to tell the abused guy that he doesn't have to go home to his father, that he can live with him now, forever. I mean, if he can drive already, why should he put up with that man, even if he IS biologically related? Some hope for the future would have been nice. Just my preference, though.
3SeveRemusUm, I don't mean to flame, but you need help with your spelling and capitalization. Like, a lot. If you don't use a beta, you should. If you did already, find another.
I liked the story itself, but it would have helped for the guy to tell the abused guy that he doesn't have to go home to his father, that he can live with him now, forever. I mean, if he can drive already, why should he put up with that man, even if he IS biologically related? Some hope for the future would have been nice. Just my preference, though.
4/9/2009 c1 anonymous
Too, cute. I hope you keep writing more stories.
Too, cute. I hope you keep writing more stories.