for Crew
74/9/2009 c1 Apollo Versaeus
I stopped reading halfway through this first chapter,...not because it sucked at all,...but because I couldn't stop laughing. The narration is awesome. I don't know whether you get all of this from personal experience or not, but it doesn't really matter. The story is turning out awesome, not because it is a particularly amazing story idea though. That is not a criticism. Most of the stories I read are only good for the main idea that the writer had in mind, and then he/she writes the story and it fails in comparison. Your main character is a.) relatable b.) hilarious c.) I would probz date her (lol). Your story has great potential. Really though, it's not so much the story as it is that you have awesome writing skills. Major props to the writer/narrator/aka Heather. Keep it coming. I'm game for a laugh.
I stopped reading halfway through this first chapter,...not because it sucked at all,...but because I couldn't stop laughing. The narration is awesome. I don't know whether you get all of this from personal experience or not, but it doesn't really matter. The story is turning out awesome, not because it is a particularly amazing story idea though. That is not a criticism. Most of the stories I read are only good for the main idea that the writer had in mind, and then he/she writes the story and it fails in comparison. Your main character is a.) relatable b.) hilarious c.) I would probz date her (lol). Your story has great potential. Really though, it's not so much the story as it is that you have awesome writing skills. Major props to the writer/narrator/aka Heather. Keep it coming. I'm game for a laugh.