for Blood Orange5/16/2009 c3 
3MidniteLayce
That was awesome! So much tension and emotion. It's amazing how you can portray each character so well and describe them in such a way that I get a perfect image in my head. I loved this chapter. ^_^ Can't wait for the next one!
3MidniteLayceThat was awesome! So much tension and emotion. It's amazing how you can portray each character so well and describe them in such a way that I get a perfect image in my head. I loved this chapter. ^_^ Can't wait for the next one!
5/16/2009 c3 18FreekyDisaster18
Wow. That's an amazing chapter and I can't wait to read what happens next!
Update soon, please :)
18FreekyDisaster18Wow. That's an amazing chapter and I can't wait to read what happens next!
Update soon, please :)
5/14/2009 c3 1lulu511
This is amazing. I love the storyline and I can't wait to see what you come up with as it progresses. :-)
1lulu511This is amazing. I love the storyline and I can't wait to see what you come up with as it progresses. :-)
5/13/2009 c3 9xemeraldeyesx
Boy, do I feel the urge to review! This is amazing, I've tried so many times to write a good Greek Mythology story and it never turns out remotely good. I love the modern twist, and now I'm totally craving blood orange juice!
9xemeraldeyesxBoy, do I feel the urge to review! This is amazing, I've tried so many times to write a good Greek Mythology story and it never turns out remotely good. I love the modern twist, and now I'm totally craving blood orange juice!
4/15/2009 c2 comfortcard00
I really like the story so far! I think it's going to turn out great. I'll keep a look out for updates!
I really like the story so far! I think it's going to turn out great. I'll keep a look out for updates!
4/11/2009 c2 1TinyMusicalShore
I liked that, I really did.
I think what I like the best is that you bring modern-ness to the ancient Greek mythology. It's great how you use all of the Gods/Godesses-Apollo, Artemis, Hera, Aphrodite- in a new way.
Can't wait to read more, nicely done : )
1TinyMusicalShoreI liked that, I really did.
I think what I like the best is that you bring modern-ness to the ancient Greek mythology. It's great how you use all of the Gods/Godesses-Apollo, Artemis, Hera, Aphrodite- in a new way.
Can't wait to read more, nicely done : )
4/11/2009 c1 TinyMusicalShore
Ooh.
Chilly and myserious.
I love it already. Off to the next chapter! *Hurridly clicks next chapter*
Ooh.
Chilly and myserious.
I love it already. Off to the next chapter! *Hurridly clicks next chapter*
4/11/2009 c2 3MidniteLayce
I can't wait to see how this story turns out. It's already so interesting and filled with almost tangible emotions. You truly are talented. Till the next chapter. ^_^
3MidniteLayceI can't wait to see how this story turns out. It's already so interesting and filled with almost tangible emotions. You truly are talented. Till the next chapter. ^_^
4/11/2009 c2 12hellosunshinee
I really like the whole Greek mythology thing and I can tell that you did a lot of research. Great chapter. Update Soon!
12hellosunshineeI really like the whole Greek mythology thing and I can tell that you did a lot of research. Great chapter. Update Soon!
4/11/2009 c2 18FreekyDisaster18
Oh wow, their abilities work against each other... that can lead to disasters.
Beautifully written and I can't wait to read more!
Update soon, please!
18FreekyDisaster18Oh wow, their abilities work against each other... that can lead to disasters.
Beautifully written and I can't wait to read more!
Update soon, please!
4/10/2009 c1 hedwigisnotdead
Ooh, I can feel a good story coming on. But hearing that one of them is the god of death worries me. i can't bear depressing endings. D: well, i can. except i'll cry a lot, haha.
just a few spelling errors: second line, i'm guessing the 'if' should be an 'of.' And second last line, 'irrupted' should be an erupted.
have fun with this story!
Ooh, I can feel a good story coming on. But hearing that one of them is the god of death worries me. i can't bear depressing endings. D: well, i can. except i'll cry a lot, haha.
just a few spelling errors: second line, i'm guessing the 'if' should be an 'of.' And second last line, 'irrupted' should be an erupted.
have fun with this story!
4/10/2009 c1 FreekyDisaster18
Ooh, I like this start and really do want to know more! Can't wait for you to update!
Update soon, please :)
Ooh, I like this start and really do want to know more! Can't wait for you to update!
Update soon, please :)