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8/7/2009 c1 1ChainedHeart
Really nice poem, my eyes are filled with tears. I am feeling like this now, after 9 years... I feel alive again. But it just seems like it's going to end in friendship. And I am thinking "why... why it does not make any sense! I want her! Unfair!" It just hurt so much :(

I liked your profile in the end, "I'LL BE SEEING YOU~!" nice choice =)

I usually end in "have fun!" ;)
7/24/2009 c1 7Wishiiwashii
that made me wonder, then made me realize. i liked it xD.. it felt like ive felt this before, but havent. o_o
7/13/2009 c1 113403 Forbidden
This is really beautiful, really sad, but very beautiful. I love the lines; "And all I see/Is an innocent girl/And a stupid boy./Both of them/Clueless of how they felt." because the tone just...works. The flow of the poem was a little choppy at times, but overall, you did a great job.

5/22/2009 c1 64Landcaster
This read like an inner monologue, and I liked the trust you instantly establish with the reader with the truth and sincerity of it. It reminded me of sonnet 36 by Shakespeare. Good job.
4/11/2009 c1 2Ward688
Sheesh I'm kinda going thru this right now. Awesome job btw! :]
4/10/2009 c1 21Juliet21691
oh my gosh that sounds so much like my life, you described the situation very well

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