for Just Friends8/7/2009 c1 
1ChainedHeart
Really nice poem, my eyes are filled with tears. I am feeling like this now, after 9 years... I feel alive again. But it just seems like it's going to end in friendship. And I am thinking "why... why it does not make any sense! I want her! Unfair!" It just hurt so much :(
I liked your profile in the end, "I'LL BE SEEING YOU~!" nice choice =)
I usually end in "have fun!" ;)
1ChainedHeartReally nice poem, my eyes are filled with tears. I am feeling like this now, after 9 years... I feel alive again. But it just seems like it's going to end in friendship. And I am thinking "why... why it does not make any sense! I want her! Unfair!" It just hurt so much :(
I liked your profile in the end, "I'LL BE SEEING YOU~!" nice choice =)
I usually end in "have fun!" ;)
7/24/2009 c1 7Wishiiwashii
that made me wonder, then made me realize. i liked it xD.. it felt like ive felt this before, but havent. o_o
7Wishiiwashiithat made me wonder, then made me realize. i liked it xD.. it felt like ive felt this before, but havent. o_o
7/13/2009 c1 113403 Forbidden
This is really beautiful, really sad, but very beautiful. I love the lines; "And all I see/Is an innocent girl/And a stupid boy./Both of them/Clueless of how they felt." because the tone just...works. The flow of the poem was a little choppy at times, but overall, you did a great job.
~403F
113403 ForbiddenThis is really beautiful, really sad, but very beautiful. I love the lines; "And all I see/Is an innocent girl/And a stupid boy./Both of them/Clueless of how they felt." because the tone just...works. The flow of the poem was a little choppy at times, but overall, you did a great job.
~403F
5/22/2009 c1 64Landcaster
This read like an inner monologue, and I liked the trust you instantly establish with the reader with the truth and sincerity of it. It reminded me of sonnet 36 by Shakespeare. Good job.
64LandcasterThis read like an inner monologue, and I liked the trust you instantly establish with the reader with the truth and sincerity of it. It reminded me of sonnet 36 by Shakespeare. Good job.
4/10/2009 c1 21Juliet21691
oh my gosh that sounds so much like my life, you described the situation very well
21Juliet21691oh my gosh that sounds so much like my life, you described the situation very well