for Hidden8/19/2009 c8 Disabled Account sdf
Oo, I almost forgot about this story.
Very nice development! Please write more. :-)
Oo, I almost forgot about this story.
Very nice development! Please write more. :-)
6/12/2009 c1 
9Audrey Manning
You've got me hooked!
Great prologue, and I'm about to go read the rest!
I love the way you introduced the king (and his relationship to the woman). I also really love the line about people coming to see a show "and she had been cast as the lead role"
Great job!
9Audrey ManningYou've got me hooked!
Great prologue, and I'm about to go read the rest!
I love the way you introduced the king (and his relationship to the woman). I also really love the line about people coming to see a show "and she had been cast as the lead role"
Great job!
4/29/2009 c7 Disabled Account sdf
Great chapter!
I think it is working out very well. It does not seem too rushed at all. The elf actually spent time protesting, and you devote space to describe Ossendra's thoughts. Excellent! :-)
Great chapter!
I think it is working out very well. It does not seem too rushed at all. The elf actually spent time protesting, and you devote space to describe Ossendra's thoughts. Excellent! :-)
4/24/2009 c6 Disabled Account sdf
Very good!
You managed to intrigue with all of these story lines. I sure hope Ossendra doesn't get caught!
Please update soon! :-)
Very good!
You managed to intrigue with all of these story lines. I sure hope Ossendra doesn't get caught!
Please update soon! :-)
4/21/2009 c5 51thatkid
it's good sorry for taking so long to read this chapter.
i liked the description of the lady in the beginning
ps please read and review my stories that you havent already
51thatkidit's good sorry for taking so long to read this chapter.
i liked the description of the lady in the beginning
ps please read and review my stories that you havent already
4/18/2009 c5 Disabled Account sdf
Very good chapter - easy to follow the action, easy to sympathize with the girl. Let's hope she manages to find a suitable disguise.
PS.
No shoes is better than one shoe!
Very good chapter - easy to follow the action, easy to sympathize with the girl. Let's hope she manages to find a suitable disguise.
PS.
No shoes is better than one shoe!
4/16/2009 c3 thatkid
my bad annoying brother logged in and i didn't notice but i as in me wrote new poems
my bad annoying brother logged in and i didn't notice but i as in me wrote new poems
4/16/2009 c3 13superpianoman
it's another great story. i just finishing writing some new poems can you read them
13superpianomanit's another great story. i just finishing writing some new poems can you read them
4/15/2009 c2 51thatkid
just as good as the first. can you read any of my stories and tell me if they're any good
51thatkidjust as good as the first. can you read any of my stories and tell me if they're any good
4/15/2009 c2 Disabled Account sdf
A very nice introduction, that set a somber mood to the story. Chapter one was a fine counterpoint to it, and I look forward to see what will happen.
A very nice introduction, that set a somber mood to the story. Chapter one was a fine counterpoint to it, and I look forward to see what will happen.
4/12/2009 c1 thatkid
you called the girl a guy in the beginning but other than that good story and great ending
you called the girl a guy in the beginning but other than that good story and great ending