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8/19/2009 c8 Disabled Account sdf
Oo, I almost forgot about this story.

Very nice development! Please write more. :-)
6/12/2009 c1 9Audrey Manning
You've got me hooked!

Great prologue, and I'm about to go read the rest!

I love the way you introduced the king (and his relationship to the woman). I also really love the line about people coming to see a show "and she had been cast as the lead role"

Great job!
4/29/2009 c7 Disabled Account sdf
Great chapter!

I think it is working out very well. It does not seem too rushed at all. The elf actually spent time protesting, and you devote space to describe Ossendra's thoughts. Excellent! :-)
4/24/2009 c6 Disabled Account sdf
Very good!

You managed to intrigue with all of these story lines. I sure hope Ossendra doesn't get caught!

Please update soon! :-)
4/21/2009 c5 51thatkid
it's good sorry for taking so long to read this chapter.

i liked the description of the lady in the beginning

ps please read and review my stories that you havent already
4/18/2009 c5 Disabled Account sdf
Very good chapter - easy to follow the action, easy to sympathize with the girl. Let's hope she manages to find a suitable disguise.

PS.

No shoes is better than one shoe!
4/16/2009 c4 thatkid
hey i personally liked this chapter.

ps read and review my new stories
4/16/2009 c3 thatkid
my bad annoying brother logged in and i didn't notice but i as in me wrote new poems
4/16/2009 c3 13superpianoman
it's another great story. i just finishing writing some new poems can you read them
4/15/2009 c2 51thatkid
just as good as the first. can you read any of my stories and tell me if they're any good
4/15/2009 c2 Disabled Account sdf
A very nice introduction, that set a somber mood to the story. Chapter one was a fine counterpoint to it, and I look forward to see what will happen.
4/12/2009 c1 thatkid
you called the girl a guy in the beginning but other than that good story and great ending

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