for Beautiful Disaster10/11/2009 c36 
2akaCHEEKS
man. this must be how soldiers' wives feel. i was watching troy and man... 'make love to your wives' and all that shit. ughh. i hate war.
2akaCHEEKSman. this must be how soldiers' wives feel. i was watching troy and man... 'make love to your wives' and all that shit. ughh. i hate war.
10/11/2009 c36 deletemyaccount2012
oh so sad. it seems like the story is going to be ending soon. another great chapter, but a little short. hope you update soon!
oh so sad. it seems like the story is going to be ending soon. another great chapter, but a little short. hope you update soon!
10/11/2009 c36 pbgurl
Reading this totaly got me teary eyed :(
This chapter really was perfect, it wasn't overdone or anything. ^_^
If the promise Izzy is supposed to keep has to do with staying away from the battle, well I imagine she will probably break it.
-Liz :D
Reading this totaly got me teary eyed :(
This chapter really was perfect, it wasn't overdone or anything. ^_^
If the promise Izzy is supposed to keep has to do with staying away from the battle, well I imagine she will probably break it.
-Liz :D
10/11/2009 c36 yuenmei
I REALLY DONT WANT JOHNNY TO DIE! great story line BTW.. im hooked as i m with a few really gud stories on fictionpree. mostly yours! ur one of the best writers on this website for romance... that's wat i think anyways
:D
I REALLY DONT WANT JOHNNY TO DIE! great story line BTW.. im hooked as i m with a few really gud stories on fictionpree. mostly yours! ur one of the best writers on this website for romance... that's wat i think anyways
:D
10/8/2009 c35 kimi xx
This might sound rude or so, but this totally reminds me of that scene of Pirates of the Carribbean: At World's End. I know this story is kind of based on that, but it would have been nice if this chapter didn't resemble it so much.
Oh I wonder if Shield is interested in Izzy..that would just make the story more interesting. lol.
This might sound rude or so, but this totally reminds me of that scene of Pirates of the Carribbean: At World's End. I know this story is kind of based on that, but it would have been nice if this chapter didn't resemble it so much.
Oh I wonder if Shield is interested in Izzy..that would just make the story more interesting. lol.
10/6/2009 c35 kelly101
That Shield guy thinks he's going to win! Johnny will kick his butt anyday! GO JOHNNY! WIN THE WAR! Please update ASAP!
That Shield guy thinks he's going to win! Johnny will kick his butt anyday! GO JOHNNY! WIN THE WAR! Please update ASAP!
10/6/2009 c35 pbgurl
Oh man, I'm worried... :( The battle is nearing!
I do hope though that Izzy gets to fight! ^_^
-Liz :D
Oh man, I'm worried... :( The battle is nearing!
I do hope though that Izzy gets to fight! ^_^
-Liz :D
10/6/2009 c35 akaCHEEKS
this so reminds me of pirates of the carribean but with a little twist of course. we all know johnny is already going to win. but what happens to izzy? isn't she going to get transported back to her world or something?
this so reminds me of pirates of the carribean but with a little twist of course. we all know johnny is already going to win. but what happens to izzy? isn't she going to get transported back to her world or something?
10/6/2009 c35 Alice Novak
Eek! omg omg! =)
I mean, I knew that they were going to fight, but you wrote it soo well!
Thankyou for updating so quickly! I'm soo happy now! You just made my night! I was cramping homework the entire day! :(
but.. WOW. Johnny is soo cool there! Izzy is adorably cute (I mean, she was cute before, but she's cuter here)!
Lovely work as always! XD x
Delineations . Alyona
Eek! omg omg! =)
I mean, I knew that they were going to fight, but you wrote it soo well!
Thankyou for updating so quickly! I'm soo happy now! You just made my night! I was cramping homework the entire day! :(
but.. WOW. Johnny is soo cool there! Izzy is adorably cute (I mean, she was cute before, but she's cuter here)!
Lovely work as always! XD x
Delineations . Alyona
10/2/2009 c34 benozir
wow yoy havent uploaded in awhile!
wow yoy havent uploaded in awhile!