for Do You Remember?4/13/2009 c1 
173Little girl Big world
Aw how sad. I can completely relate to this being apart from someone you love is hard. I like how you went from good memories to how you feel without them. And the line "I feel like breaking every clock" was amazing. I like the touch of hope at the end saying you will someday be together. Great job!
173Little girl Big worldAw how sad. I can completely relate to this being apart from someone you love is hard. I like how you went from good memories to how you feel without them. And the line "I feel like breaking every clock" was amazing. I like the touch of hope at the end saying you will someday be together. Great job!
4/12/2009 c1 8black.magic89
how terribly sad:( My favorite line was "Back when I wasn't so weak". It just touched me because love made me weak once too. Great job, thank you for writting this:)
8black.magic89how terribly sad:( My favorite line was "Back when I wasn't so weak". It just touched me because love made me weak once too. Great job, thank you for writting this:)