
4/12/2009 c1
82brightest darkness
I liked the fact that this poem was about a person DURING the race, not after, or the nervousness(?) before hand... It was a good look into the mind of the winner.
I also liked the fact that you described the pain that most people who are running a race feel during the last stretch because they are really pushing themselves.
Great Poem!

I liked the fact that this poem was about a person DURING the race, not after, or the nervousness(?) before hand... It was a good look into the mind of the winner.
I also liked the fact that you described the pain that most people who are running a race feel during the last stretch because they are really pushing themselves.
Great Poem!