for Always and Forever Yours10/30/2010 c1 
1loveSZbrownie
i think the story was a good idea and it was very cute, but i can't say i completely enjoyed it. For most of the story, it really feels like you're just telling what's happening. I think your story could be better if you showed what was happening instead of just directly tell us.
and something else that kind of bothered me was that you switched between the third person and the first person a lot. It would have been fine if you kept the italicised parts in the first person and the normal story telling part in third person, but you didn't. It made the story a bit inconsistent, but overall your story is good in terms of its romance.
1loveSZbrowniei think the story was a good idea and it was very cute, but i can't say i completely enjoyed it. For most of the story, it really feels like you're just telling what's happening. I think your story could be better if you showed what was happening instead of just directly tell us.
and something else that kind of bothered me was that you switched between the third person and the first person a lot. It would have been fine if you kept the italicised parts in the first person and the normal story telling part in third person, but you didn't. It made the story a bit inconsistent, but overall your story is good in terms of its romance.
8/7/2010 c1 ForgottenTales
Aw... Quinn is such a sweet guy. *sighs dreamily* Lucky gal. Wish I had a best friend/boyfriend like that.
Loved, loved this. The whole story really potrayed Quinn and Alexis's relationship very well. You just can't help but fall in love with him.
Aw... Quinn is such a sweet guy. *sighs dreamily* Lucky gal. Wish I had a best friend/boyfriend like that.
Loved, loved this. The whole story really potrayed Quinn and Alexis's relationship very well. You just can't help but fall in love with him.
4/24/2010 c1 WithEveryReason
This story was cute.
But disgusting.
He had a girlfriend, and he was sleeping with her.
Does this girl have no standards what so ever? A little pathetic, not going to lie.
This story was cute.
But disgusting.
He had a girlfriend, and he was sleeping with her.
Does this girl have no standards what so ever? A little pathetic, not going to lie.
10/2/2009 c1 2DianaSweetie
Wow that is so sweet and cute it just made me want to cry because I was so happy.
It was the most cutest thing ever as I said. I loved it
2DianaSweetieWow that is so sweet and cute it just made me want to cry because I was so happy.
It was the most cutest thing ever as I said. I loved it
9/8/2009 c1 xEchoxInfernox
anutha story full of pure awesomeness! jst so u kno, im jstsumrandomgirl XD, i go by that name wen im 2 lazy 2 log in lol but i wanted 2 add u and ur stories 2 my favs so here i am. not that u needed 2 kno ne of that but oh well=D. so. i read all ur one-shots and they r all freaking awesome! and so funny! i luv em, u got mad skills;). 1 day im gonna review all of em but not now, 2 tired lol. so newho yea. love em all. cya!
anutha story full of pure awesomeness! jst so u kno, im jstsumrandomgirl XD, i go by that name wen im 2 lazy 2 log in lol but i wanted 2 add u and ur stories 2 my favs so here i am. not that u needed 2 kno ne of that but oh well=D. so. i read all ur one-shots and they r all freaking awesome! and so funny! i luv em, u got mad skills;). 1 day im gonna review all of em but not now, 2 tired lol. so newho yea. love em all. cya!
8/14/2009 c1 1Vampy Wolfy
I really liked this story and how you had there relationship develop! I think it would be really nice of you if you wrote this story from Quinn's point of view!
1Vampy WolfyI really liked this story and how you had there relationship develop! I think it would be really nice of you if you wrote this story from Quinn's point of view!
8/4/2009 c1 midnitesport
aw! this is such a sweet oneshot. cute ending with the "and lived happily ever after until the kids came along" - lol.
aw! this is such a sweet oneshot. cute ending with the "and lived happily ever after until the kids came along" - lol.