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6/7/2009 c1 MarloCarlo10
haha that was cute!

The last paragraph was hilarious!
6/4/2009 c1 4anitsirK
Hahahaha! That was good. But at the last segment, I was like, "WTHeck?". Lol. Still cute, though.
5/11/2009 c1 Hear Harmony
I think there were definitely a few kinks that could be worked out to make it absolutely nearly perfection, but I can't remember them because I'm entirely unhelpful and am distracted by the hilarity of the last sentence. Wait, no, I remembered them. I agree with Ravina's review, a bit more detail and I think you could have revised some of your lines to better fit the mood.

Other than that... Um, I want my own Quinn. Like now. It was adorable.
4/23/2009 c1 TwinkleHeart
4/16/2009 c1 Grace
Very cute!
4/15/2009 c1 28woodstock1969
I just have to say, great last line. =) The story itself was adorable, too.
4/15/2009 c1 6anita darling
:D Naw~
4/15/2009 c1 9Lily Llynn
It's cute, but the last part (the only first person POV part) was most definitely unnecessary and I wish there was some sentence variety. A lot of subject-verb, subject-verb. But yeah, very cute and realistic (enough for me), and I'm very glad artistic dreamer added this to our c2. (:
4/14/2009 c1 OoohLookACat
that's too adorable

i loved it

and there's not much else i can say

4/14/2009 c1 24Ravina
I really like the transition of events, and the events themselves, but I think you can add more detail to the italicized bits to improve the story!

But I really enjoyed reading it! Good job!

- Rebekah
4/13/2009 c1 2ThisArtWar
Ahahaha "That is until the kids came along." I laughed at that. Great story, very cute. I enjoyed reading it.

~Fell Off Her Rocker Again
4/13/2009 c1 10jeepers09
I liked this a lot!
4/13/2009 c1 DLETE THIS OLD
aww this story is soo cute
4/13/2009 c1 3beibhinn
Aw, this was a cute read. Thank you for that love blast ;)
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