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9/3/2011 c1 3LanternLight13
This was well done, eery, but well done.
4/15/2009 c1 2NadiaC
Hm. I don't think you built it up enough for the last sentence to really ring true. Maybe some flashbacks interspersed into the dialogue? Anyway, great story - I really enjoyed reading it!

~Nadia

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