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8/23/2009 c1 CandleQueen
"The one always reading

The one whose books are tear-stained"

Those lines corresponded nicely, and I liked the imagery. :)

"The single one; the sensitive one"

The anaphora in that line balances it out nicely.

-Ramen
4/14/2009 c1 1the meaning of life
I like it...not as much "Reality" but I still liked it. I have other poems too if you want to review them. no pressure though =) Anyways, I liked it, didn't love it, but I barely love anything. Love is such a strong word, I don't use it often. Nice poem!

-The Meaning Of Life
4/14/2009 c1 110The Dragon Lover
This has a lot of emotion, and it really makes me sympathize with you/the narrator. I've (sort of) been there before, and it's incredible and rewarding to connect with your reader like that. Good job. :3

Lots of dragon-y love (and cookies!),

~DL ('Dragon Lover')

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