for When Will You Love Me?4/14/2009 c1 
38Forget-Me-Not's Desire
This is really good! I felt the emotion behind it! You really worked hard on this! Maybe you should try to write a rhyming poem, you'd be good at it! Keep writing!
38Forget-Me-Not's DesireThis is really good! I felt the emotion behind it! You really worked hard on this! Maybe you should try to write a rhyming poem, you'd be good at it! Keep writing!
4/14/2009 c1 36xxNightenGalexx
I love the story line of the poem, however you pattern is a bit thrown off in places.You need to focus on the spacing of the breaks, it has an odd flow. But regardless im adding it to my favs because i adore it.
36xxNightenGalexxI love the story line of the poem, however you pattern is a bit thrown off in places.You need to focus on the spacing of the breaks, it has an odd flow. But regardless im adding it to my favs because i adore it.