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4/15/2009 c1 scarlet stars
"And how old was I when the moon hung

so low I could stand upon tip-toes and

graze it with my fingertips?"

Lovely. This piece was great. The way that you poetically describe the speaker's realization is powerful and interesting. However, I do feel though that the poem lost some of its original obscurity. Likewise, I really wasn't too fond of the clice puppet comparison.
4/15/2009 c1 greedy man
nteresting thoughts..

have you seen any of william blake's work?~.. you might enjoy it.. "i must create a system or be enslaved by another man's."
4/15/2009 c1 lamb chops
Wow, I can relate to this. Good job.

Have you considered a career in song writing? These could be the lyrics, only thing you'll need is a melody!

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