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4/17/2009 c1 48Julia Wall
I liked the way you ended it. The way it twisted and ended bluntly was interesting. However, I would suggest dividing your lines differently, as the variation in length is a bit random and affects the flow. Over all, I enjoyed reading it.
4/15/2009 c1 lymli
I do at the end is cool.

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