for Scarred for Life10/8/2015 c1 Lea
I read this story b4 it was actually published and as soon as i realised I could buy it on iBooks I did. I can't wait for the rest of your stories to get published. Keep up the good work and I hope to see more of Dane and Nicole's life
I read this story b4 it was actually published and as soon as i realised I could buy it on iBooks I did. I can't wait for the rest of your stories to get published. Keep up the good work and I hope to see more of Dane and Nicole's life
4/21/2014 c1 Guest
Well...some of people cant do that and we can just read it here.
what should we do?
i really like your stories and i really want to read this one too.
Well...some of people cant do that and we can just read it here.
what should we do?
i really like your stories and i really want to read this one too.
11/18/2013 c2 Starbelly
wow, this is great, congrats!
wow, this is great, congrats!
11/18/2013 c2 LJ58
Congrats, and good luck.
Congrats, and good luck.
11/18/2013 c2 Sapphic Sam
Oh my goodness, I am so happy for you! I have been waiting for this since you first announced it. Next check I get, I'm getting this on my kindle, I can't wait!
Oh my goodness, I am so happy for you! I have been waiting for this since you first announced it. Next check I get, I'm getting this on my kindle, I can't wait!
7/22/2013 c1 
3Samson3105
Thats amazing :D, but by published you mean being printed or just switching websites?
3Samson3105Thats amazing :D, but by published you mean being printed or just switching websites?
5/4/2013 c4 Taint.Revile.Elude
You and your characters in their basketball shorts. :) I feel like I hardly know Dane or Nicole, though you have expanded much more on who Nicole is through her own eyes and Dane's. The picture of Dane, however, is not so clear.
You and your characters in their basketball shorts. :) I feel like I hardly know Dane or Nicole, though you have expanded much more on who Nicole is through her own eyes and Dane's. The picture of Dane, however, is not so clear.
5/4/2013 c1 Taint.Revile.Elude
I cannot remember what my plans were for Misty now that my anger has passed, but I would like to add Tyler and Kavi to my list of future victims, as character-death will be involved. He annoyed me so very much from the beginning, and I could not even say what it was about him...until now. He was arrogant, inconsiderate, and a misogynist to boot! All that "'no' really means 'convince me'" BS raises my ire! Moving on. _
I want to go through what I like and don't like about this story at some point, in hopes that my opinion will help you fine-tune and possibly publish this bad girl sooner rather than later! If that would be all right?
I am tired, but I like Dane's eyes being compared to smoke; that conjured up a much better image than the simple use of a color. At that point, I really got what you were going for and in visualizing that, I was able to imagine, what I feel to be, the look in her eyes as well as the look of her eyes, you get me?
And I'm off!
I cannot remember what my plans were for Misty now that my anger has passed, but I would like to add Tyler and Kavi to my list of future victims, as character-death will be involved. He annoyed me so very much from the beginning, and I could not even say what it was about him...until now. He was arrogant, inconsiderate, and a misogynist to boot! All that "'no' really means 'convince me'" BS raises my ire! Moving on. _
I want to go through what I like and don't like about this story at some point, in hopes that my opinion will help you fine-tune and possibly publish this bad girl sooner rather than later! If that would be all right?
I am tired, but I like Dane's eyes being compared to smoke; that conjured up a much better image than the simple use of a color. At that point, I really got what you were going for and in visualizing that, I was able to imagine, what I feel to be, the look in her eyes as well as the look of her eyes, you get me?
And I'm off!
4/20/2013 c16 1Hikaru Akihiro
Yet another story I enjoy. Sad it didn't get published. If it ever does I'll definitely buy it to support such a great author. The story had very nice pacing. Anyway looking forward to what I read next.
1Hikaru AkihiroYet another story I enjoy. Sad it didn't get published. If it ever does I'll definitely buy it to support such a great author. The story had very nice pacing. Anyway looking forward to what I read next.
4/7/2013 c16 iam.who
They're so sweet together. I love how Dane stood up for Nicole's dreams. I hope that those kinds of love do appear in reality. :)
They're so sweet together. I love how Dane stood up for Nicole's dreams. I hope that those kinds of love do appear in reality. :)
4/7/2013 c13 iam.who
That was intense. I really hate Tyler.. So selfish.. I mean he's just using Nicole even when they were dating and now he wanted her back for him to look good in front of her parents. And her parents! Why would they believe other people over their child? That is so wrong. Also, Danny's parents.. How could they.. :(
That was intense. I really hate Tyler.. So selfish.. I mean he's just using Nicole even when they were dating and now he wanted her back for him to look good in front of her parents. And her parents! Why would they believe other people over their child? That is so wrong. Also, Danny's parents.. How could they.. :(
4/5/2013 c8 iam.who
Loving how they look out for each other. It's one of those confusing moments where the question will be- is there something more or is it just her normal behavior.
Loving how they look out for each other. It's one of those confusing moments where the question will be- is there something more or is it just her normal behavior.