for Playing With The Big Boys11/5/2013 c9 Natalie
I really like this story so far. I think that maybe you could add in some more funny moments with her as Perry trying not to get caught. I hope you keep her disguise going on for a bit longer, theres so much more you can do :)
I really like this story so far. I think that maybe you could add in some more funny moments with her as Perry trying not to get caught. I hope you keep her disguise going on for a bit longer, theres so much more you can do :)
8/11/2013 c9 BlakJaq
YAY! it's been forever since i've caught up on this story, but it's grown up without me. *so proud* it's wonderful, can't wait until the next installment. :)
YAY! it's been forever since i've caught up on this story, but it's grown up without me. *so proud* it's wonderful, can't wait until the next installment. :)
7/3/2013 c1 
2Neo Rulez
Nice story it was very interesting can't wait until Perry meets Vince and the twins
2Neo RulezNice story it was very interesting can't wait until Perry meets Vince and the twins
4/16/2011 c9 14K.M.Simpson
Mine is exactly the same, and I've really wanted yo update for some time aswell.
14K.M.SimpsonMine is exactly the same, and I've really wanted yo update for some time aswell.
1/1/2011 c8 Your Princeliness
Wow...Why am I not surprised? Nice going :) The chapter was nicely done - a lot of emotional conflict and valuable insight into the characters. Try not to delete this one, alright?
PS: tell the New Year's baby I said happy birthday.
Wow...Why am I not surprised? Nice going :) The chapter was nicely done - a lot of emotional conflict and valuable insight into the characters. Try not to delete this one, alright?
PS: tell the New Year's baby I said happy birthday.
12/29/2010 c8 WordLoveAffair
I LOVE you! I just registered for FP and I found your story almost instantly! I read it all just now and I can't wait for more! ^^ I love stories that aren't mainstream so I'll give you some imaginary cookies for you because of your originality and creativity. Please update soon for the newbies!
~WLA~
I LOVE you! I just registered for FP and I found your story almost instantly! I read it all just now and I can't wait for more! ^^ I love stories that aren't mainstream so I'll give you some imaginary cookies for you because of your originality and creativity. Please update soon for the newbies!
~WLA~
12/29/2010 c8 MooMoo D
Lol. No probs. Although I'm not surprised you did that, since you do kinda suck with technology. :) JK. Such an emotional chapter this one, but the only thing I would've liked more was some description on her big bro Lukas. He sounds like SUCH a hottie! :D
Can't wait until the next one, so update soon (like, within the next couple of months soon).
Lol. No probs. Although I'm not surprised you did that, since you do kinda suck with technology. :) JK. Such an emotional chapter this one, but the only thing I would've liked more was some description on her big bro Lukas. He sounds like SUCH a hottie! :D
Can't wait until the next one, so update soon (like, within the next couple of months soon).
12/29/2010 c8 5Brandi Heir
aw! it was so cute! the ending i mean, and the part where lukas comes. i wanna big brother like that! actually, i want a big brother period but that's beside the point.
it's really sad about the coward thing...and the stones and getting beat up. kind of messed up. but i like the emotion you put into all of it. really awesome!
5Brandi Heiraw! it was so cute! the ending i mean, and the part where lukas comes. i wanna big brother like that! actually, i want a big brother period but that's beside the point.
it's really sad about the coward thing...and the stones and getting beat up. kind of messed up. but i like the emotion you put into all of it. really awesome!
12/29/2010 c8 pille-ip
Oh this is good! You've taken a theme that's not very rare yet not too overused and instead of it being a cliche it's anything but - adventure, good characters, interesting plot. I really can't wait for a new update.
PS! Happy holidays and a very merry 2011th!
Oh this is good! You've taken a theme that's not very rare yet not too overused and instead of it being a cliche it's anything but - adventure, good characters, interesting plot. I really can't wait for a new update.
PS! Happy holidays and a very merry 2011th!
10/19/2010 c7 pille-ip
Yay, I really like Nix. It's actually quite cool that she sort of has 2 different personalities too as Nix & Perry. I like the idea/plot too, but I'm really starting to wonder if she's not too easygoing for someone mourning, ripped apart from family, being undercover & being an agent too. I mean - wouldn't she be more inroverted & paranoid if she were all that? Besides her disguise not being one and her having a double undercover life wouldn't that be too risky... But I like her anyway, so update soon!
Yay, I really like Nix. It's actually quite cool that she sort of has 2 different personalities too as Nix & Perry. I like the idea/plot too, but I'm really starting to wonder if she's not too easygoing for someone mourning, ripped apart from family, being undercover & being an agent too. I mean - wouldn't she be more inroverted & paranoid if she were all that? Besides her disguise not being one and her having a double undercover life wouldn't that be too risky... But I like her anyway, so update soon!
8/29/2010 c7 1BitterSweetMoments
I just read the whole thing this morning. Please continue! It's a wonderful story, I can't wait until the next chapter! :D
1BitterSweetMomentsI just read the whole thing this morning. Please continue! It's a wonderful story, I can't wait until the next chapter! :D
8/27/2010 c7 5thesecretsinmyhair
this is good but quite confusing, every second you change the boys around and theri friends, and i get muddled! but i seriously love this! one more thing i dont get as well is how Phoenix can be a teacher and student at the same time!
5thesecretsinmyhairthis is good but quite confusing, every second you change the boys around and theri friends, and i get muddled! but i seriously love this! one more thing i dont get as well is how Phoenix can be a teacher and student at the same time!