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4/23/2009 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
So much detail! Rich and esoteric! I'm in love with the observations you give away here, like being at the beach and people watching, only so much more intense, because it's through your eyes, rather then my own.

Everyone sees things differently, every person gives off different energy, and we take the energy from others that we most recognize, or is more foreign to us. I feel like I'm not making much sense, but I really enjoyed this piece.

You've grown so much a writer since I first started reading your work. I'm truely a fan.

Much love,

Juliet.
4/18/2009 c1 12Sir Scott
Pretty profound. I wonder how you done in the contest?

~SirScott
4/17/2009 c1 Raistlin Majere
Simply lovely.

Living, beautiful imagery.

I can almost see it. Almost.
4/17/2009 c1 Isca
"I'm left to deteriorate inside these summer days." I'm not a fan of hot weather, so I liked this line a lot.

"I hear children sounds." Fascinating.

"August blue skies." Lovely imagery! :)

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