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5TMSantos
My heart feels heavy. I feel sad for Enid because she sees things in an entirely different way from the reality of Helmut's situation. Maybe I'm feeling this way because she's so innocent in that aspect and he did his best to explain his situation and impart wisdom to an eight year old kid.
Thank you for this wonderful story.
5TMSantosMy heart feels heavy. I feel sad for Enid because she sees things in an entirely different way from the reality of Helmut's situation. Maybe I'm feeling this way because she's so innocent in that aspect and he did his best to explain his situation and impart wisdom to an eight year old kid.
Thank you for this wonderful story.
12/5/2010 c5 29YasuRan
As I was reading, I couldn't help but think of 'The Boy in the Striped Pyjamas'. The titles are quite similar and so is the content to a point. I really loved the tenderness of this piece, which is important considering the story is written from a child's POV. Your attention to details is also a nice touch: the spider badge for instance. Despite the language being quite simple, you managed to convey everything that could be gauged from the setting and what the characters had to portray. I ended up feeling for Helmet just as much as Enid does.
All in all, well done to you! Hope to see more, writing-wise :)
29YasuRanAs I was reading, I couldn't help but think of 'The Boy in the Striped Pyjamas'. The titles are quite similar and so is the content to a point. I really loved the tenderness of this piece, which is important considering the story is written from a child's POV. Your attention to details is also a nice touch: the spider badge for instance. Despite the language being quite simple, you managed to convey everything that could be gauged from the setting and what the characters had to portray. I ended up feeling for Helmet just as much as Enid does.
All in all, well done to you! Hope to see more, writing-wise :)
10/7/2010 c5 Ambyy
aw! This story was so cute! I loved it. I wish that it continued so I could find out what Enid thought about it when she grew up! And what happened to kind 'Helmet'.
aw! This story was so cute! I loved it. I wish that it continued so I could find out what Enid thought about it when she grew up! And what happened to kind 'Helmet'.
2/23/2010 c5 1Maia England
That's a sad ending! I hope he got out alive haha. This was a wonderful story :)
Maia
1Maia EnglandThat's a sad ending! I hope he got out alive haha. This was a wonderful story :)
Maia
1/30/2010 c5 VitamViva
...This brought me to tears.This story deserves much more reviews. When Enid grows up, I hope she won't regret making such a forbidden friend. Great story!
...This brought me to tears.This story deserves much more reviews. When Enid grows up, I hope she won't regret making such a forbidden friend. Great story!
11/23/2009 c5 8Written
wow, you are totally brilliant. this story was so... sad? thrilling? i don't know, but just beautiful.
8Writtenwow, you are totally brilliant. this story was so... sad? thrilling? i don't know, but just beautiful.
9/4/2009 c5 2limbolical
I don't know why this story has never been reviewed. It is so beautiful and breathtaking. Thank you for such a lovely short story.
2limbolicalI don't know why this story has never been reviewed. It is so beautiful and breathtaking. Thank you for such a lovely short story.