for Picture Perfect10/1/2009 c18 
1RobotInTheHead
Hey!
I tried to send you an email but it didn't work. This story is so cure with Darrell and Nikki! Almost done,can't wait for the last chapter!
Thanks!
p.s. Maybe a different email, may work?
1RobotInTheHeadHey!
I tried to send you an email but it didn't work. This story is so cure with Darrell and Nikki! Almost done,can't wait for the last chapter!
Thanks!
p.s. Maybe a different email, may work?
10/1/2009 c18 1teenagedirtbagbaby
omg this was INSANELY GOOD!
i loved it so much, you are an incredible writer (:
haah i stayed up all night reading the 18 chapters!
canr wait to read the final chapter!
1teenagedirtbagbabyomg this was INSANELY GOOD!
i loved it so much, you are an incredible writer (:
haah i stayed up all night reading the 18 chapters!
canr wait to read the final chapter!
10/1/2009 c18 2ShrimpoJewels
Aw they're cute together I love it...
And Jason should probably work on the whole 'can't be alone thing'...it's not healthy lol
2ShrimpoJewelsAw they're cute together I love it...
And Jason should probably work on the whole 'can't be alone thing'...it's not healthy lol
10/1/2009 c18 MarieAnn
Amazingly good chapter! I'm glad that Nikki and Jason got reconciled. Hopefully Jason will stop my Darrell's house so that they could reconcile, too. I can't wait to see what Nikki got Darrell. Please update soon! :-)
Amazingly good chapter! I'm glad that Nikki and Jason got reconciled. Hopefully Jason will stop my Darrell's house so that they could reconcile, too. I can't wait to see what Nikki got Darrell. Please update soon! :-)
10/1/2009 c18 applenica
hi! nikki and darrell are so cute. i can feel the chemistry.
i already see your website. it's cool and give romantic vibe.
what kind of staff do you need?
good luck ^_^
hi! nikki and darrell are so cute. i can feel the chemistry.
i already see your website. it's cool and give romantic vibe.
what kind of staff do you need?
good luck ^_^
9/24/2009 c17 23Hypa To Hell And Back
im back! hhaa I LOVE IT! hehe yeah i know it is so adorable. i want to be niki i really do! haha any who great chapter hun. ill read the next later on
23Hypa To Hell And Backim back! hhaa I LOVE IT! hehe yeah i know it is so adorable. i want to be niki i really do! haha any who great chapter hun. ill read the next later on
9/24/2009 c16 Hypa To Hell And Back
i'm sorry i'm sorry i'm sorry i'm sorry i'm sorry i'm sorry so so sorry,i got in to a fight with dan, and you know i think your psychic cuz all he has done to me is lie. arg! but any who i sat down this morning to review for you and ill read the next two tonight if i can. not promising anything but i will try as hard as i can okay.
this was so sweet. just adorable. it needs a tad bit of edititing because there was one time near the biginning of the dinner when you said where jason was moving it food around the plate, you put table instead so i'm guessing it is wrong. there area a couple of toher things in there i think but not much. that was really good and i cant wait until the next chapter i really can't
i'm sorry i'm sorry i'm sorry i'm sorry i'm sorry i'm sorry so so sorry,i got in to a fight with dan, and you know i think your psychic cuz all he has done to me is lie. arg! but any who i sat down this morning to review for you and ill read the next two tonight if i can. not promising anything but i will try as hard as i can okay.
this was so sweet. just adorable. it needs a tad bit of edititing because there was one time near the biginning of the dinner when you said where jason was moving it food around the plate, you put table instead so i'm guessing it is wrong. there area a couple of toher things in there i think but not much. that was really good and i cant wait until the next chapter i really can't
9/20/2009 c1 We Used To Wait
You switch from present tense to past in one sentence, and the whole story seems like it's in past.
"I don't know why he was with her." Yup ^.^ You need to fix that.
"You might not even realize he was doing it."
And, well, yeah, a lot of other tense mistakes you have to look out for.
"Later on tonight, when he called her just before they went to bed, he would curl up on the bed and wait for her to finish picking on whatever flaw he had."
You switch from present tense to past in one sentence, and the whole story seems like it's in past.
"I don't know why he was with her." Yup ^.^ You need to fix that.
"You might not even realize he was doing it."
And, well, yeah, a lot of other tense mistakes you have to look out for.
"Later on tonight, when he called her just before they went to bed, he would curl up on the bed and wait for her to finish picking on whatever flaw he had."
9/19/2009 c17 6Lanie Is
Aw, that is SO CUTE.
:D
I'm a little nervous for the next chapter though.
V_V
I don't want Jason fucking everything up like he has a habit of doing...
6Lanie IsAw, that is SO CUTE.
:D
I'm a little nervous for the next chapter though.
V_V
I don't want Jason fucking everything up like he has a habit of doing...
9/16/2009 c17 metallicdiamond
this story is soo freaking good! it's heart warming and everything, im just wondering...did they use protection ahaha. because err, yeah she just found out his brother's girlfriend is pregnant and if they didn't use protection, uh oh. two grandchildren for the Michaels's! ahah
this story is soo freaking good! it's heart warming and everything, im just wondering...did they use protection ahaha. because err, yeah she just found out his brother's girlfriend is pregnant and if they didn't use protection, uh oh. two grandchildren for the Michaels's! ahah
9/16/2009 c17 MarieAnn
I just love Darrell and Nikki. Jason is just weird. I wish I had my own Darrell like that. Lol. I'm sad that the story is almost over :-(. I have really enjoyed reading it. Great chapter as usual! Update soon!
I just love Darrell and Nikki. Jason is just weird. I wish I had my own Darrell like that. Lol. I'm sad that the story is almost over :-(. I have really enjoyed reading it. Great chapter as usual! Update soon!
9/16/2009 c17 3Princess of Chocolate
YES! I AM THE FIRST PERSON ON THE LIST! I GOTS THIS! oh yeah!
aww, they are SO ahdorahble. but, its like, it cant be perfect! i keep waiting for something horrid to happen. but, dont make anything horrible happen, please? :D
3Princess of ChocolateYES! I AM THE FIRST PERSON ON THE LIST! I GOTS THIS! oh yeah!
aww, they are SO ahdorahble. but, its like, it cant be perfect! i keep waiting for something horrid to happen. but, dont make anything horrible happen, please? :D