for All Boys School? Please, it's my school now7/30/2009 c19 thebeebeegun
I hope this is review 100. :D I relaly like this story, I can't wait to see what happens with Aaron and Rob(yn) now. Time to kiss and make out, umm, up. :P LOVED IT!
-Bee-
I hope this is review 100. :D I relaly like this story, I can't wait to see what happens with Aaron and Rob(yn) now. Time to kiss and make out, umm, up. :P LOVED IT!
-Bee-
7/30/2009 c19 
4Blaze-Brook
i THINK this is the 100th review as it says you have 99... anyway about the chapter! it was really good! i like the fact that everythign has been made clear!
4Blaze-Brooki THINK this is the 100th review as it says you have 99... anyway about the chapter! it was really good! i like the fact that everythign has been made clear!
7/29/2009 c19 2Rae Simmons
But she's already got him! Geeze! These two. -shakes head- And then Alli and Darien? Does nobody talk to each other!
2Rae SimmonsBut she's already got him! Geeze! These two. -shakes head- And then Alli and Darien? Does nobody talk to each other!
7/23/2009 c18 5whisper-sweet-nothings
:) I've been looking for someone to write a story with too! Maybe we could work together? I'd really like to :) But it's your call :) Update soon!
- Christina
5whisper-sweet-nothings:) I've been looking for someone to write a story with too! Maybe we could work together? I'd really like to :) But it's your call :) Update soon!
- Christina
7/23/2009 c18 u wouldjustbe AWESO without ME
I love girl in all guy schools. Which is y I luv this story :) do u no any only girl in all guy schools stories? I read false facades and jaided but do u no anymore? Thanks a lot if u do
I love girl in all guy schools. Which is y I luv this story :) do u no any only girl in all guy schools stories? I read false facades and jaided but do u no anymore? Thanks a lot if u do
7/23/2009 c18 Urufu-chan
It's okay, just do the best you can and take your time. We want a really good ending ((or pre-ending from what you just said about a sequel)) So take your time to make something you are proud of. ^_^ Relax and update soon please the story must good on. ((good job by the way))
It's okay, just do the best you can and take your time. We want a really good ending ((or pre-ending from what you just said about a sequel)) So take your time to make something you are proud of. ^_^ Relax and update soon please the story must good on. ((good job by the way))
7/23/2009 c18 12TheAirIbreathe
I'm sorry this chapter was so difficult to write for you =\ you probably shouldn't have written at all if it was killing you. I don't mean that in an offensive way - I just mean maybe you should take a step back and re-think it, or at least find a way to get in the mood.
I've probably reviewed with this a few times, but you do need to edit a lot more carefully. You tend to say 'my' instead of 'me', and a lot of other things.
There are also a lot of tense changes. Nearly every paragraph sometimes is in a different tense.
All in all, this chapter is a little disappointing. But I'm still following your story and I'm hoping it will pick up. :)
12TheAirIbreatheI'm sorry this chapter was so difficult to write for you =\ you probably shouldn't have written at all if it was killing you. I don't mean that in an offensive way - I just mean maybe you should take a step back and re-think it, or at least find a way to get in the mood.
I've probably reviewed with this a few times, but you do need to edit a lot more carefully. You tend to say 'my' instead of 'me', and a lot of other things.
There are also a lot of tense changes. Nearly every paragraph sometimes is in a different tense.
All in all, this chapter is a little disappointing. But I'm still following your story and I'm hoping it will pick up. :)
7/21/2009 c13 13Irish Eyes 63
Hey! This was an incredible story. I cannot wait for the shit load of drama! Oh so much fun.
Aaron really is a dick for using another girl as a distration, so you can kill him off. I like how you put all the males into the hands of the only girl, it made me laugh my ass off. And you are wonderful with your descritions, so props to you! I hope that Aaron figures out that he 'gay' to a guy who is really girl but pretends to be a guy. Interesting concept!
13Irish Eyes 63Hey! This was an incredible story. I cannot wait for the shit load of drama! Oh so much fun.
Aaron really is a dick for using another girl as a distration, so you can kill him off. I like how you put all the males into the hands of the only girl, it made me laugh my ass off. And you are wonderful with your descritions, so props to you! I hope that Aaron figures out that he 'gay' to a guy who is really girl but pretends to be a guy. Interesting concept!
7/18/2009 c17 Shadow Kissed Twilight
Oh wow! I must be slow. I did not see that coming, but now it makes since. Wow, Aaron must be conflicted, find out the two people he likes are the same person. Aw, they kissed, but Rob was in character both times, so when is she going to kiss him out of character?
Please update when you can and be safe!
-Danny
Oh wow! I must be slow. I did not see that coming, but now it makes since. Wow, Aaron must be conflicted, find out the two people he likes are the same person. Aw, they kissed, but Rob was in character both times, so when is she going to kiss him out of character?
Please update when you can and be safe!
-Danny
7/17/2009 c17 7Tipsy101
Great chapter!
I wondered if Kat was Rob.
The end bit was so unexpected though!
Can't wait to read more :)
7Tipsy101Great chapter!
I wondered if Kat was Rob.
The end bit was so unexpected though!
Can't wait to read more :)
7/15/2009 c17 1cerulean.isis1360
no. way.
please, please, please, please, please, PLEASE update!
i love this story.
1cerulean.isis1360no. way.
please, please, please, please, please, PLEASE update!
i love this story.
7/13/2009 c17 justagirlx3
omg! the truth is revealed!
omg! the truth is revealed!
7/13/2009 c15 justagirlx3
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W. T. F.
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W. T. F.
7/13/2009 c17 throughfallingshadows
is that the end? oh goodness... i hate that she was molested...ew freak! I knew Kat was Rob though..I just knew it right when he met her.
is that the end? oh goodness... i hate that she was molested...ew freak! I knew Kat was Rob though..I just knew it right when he met her.