for Two Shadows Over My Dream Of Nature5/3/2009 c1 Si-Sidera
Hey!
Si-Sidera here, I just checked out one of your stories! And I have to say, it was really good! I've been feeling like this a lot nowadays, and I can slowly feel my soul rusting :(. God gave us this Earth to roam and love, but I don't think a lot of people in America have quite been living up to that... I liked your message a lot. But maybe, you could use more metaphors and personifications? It would make your writing come more alive.
Be Who You Want To Be!
Si-Sidera
aka Christina
P.S. Very nice to meet you!
Hey!
Si-Sidera here, I just checked out one of your stories! And I have to say, it was really good! I've been feeling like this a lot nowadays, and I can slowly feel my soul rusting :(. God gave us this Earth to roam and love, but I don't think a lot of people in America have quite been living up to that... I liked your message a lot. But maybe, you could use more metaphors and personifications? It would make your writing come more alive.
Be Who You Want To Be!
Si-Sidera
aka Christina
P.S. Very nice to meet you!
4/19/2009 c1 
19wolfprint
shadows..what are shadows? are they the reflected image of our fears, of our true nature? do they control our lives? shadows disappear with the brightness of the sun, and to the welcome of the night. they are fairly weak, but terrorizing because they are unbeknown. they cannot stop you, nor will they ever will. accept them, but do not dwell them. whether if you are a creature of day or night, they will disappear and you will walk on.-i love this poem! i love how you reflected nature in it!
19wolfprintshadows..what are shadows? are they the reflected image of our fears, of our true nature? do they control our lives? shadows disappear with the brightness of the sun, and to the welcome of the night. they are fairly weak, but terrorizing because they are unbeknown. they cannot stop you, nor will they ever will. accept them, but do not dwell them. whether if you are a creature of day or night, they will disappear and you will walk on.-i love this poem! i love how you reflected nature in it!