for Candy Land5/25/2009 c6 Waging Wonder
Damn, that is a creepy-ass forest for being made of candy, especially the goo snake.
By the way, your character interaction is perfect, funny and clever and with excellent dialogue.
Keep writing :D
Damn, that is a creepy-ass forest for being made of candy, especially the goo snake.
By the way, your character interaction is perfect, funny and clever and with excellent dialogue.
Keep writing :D
5/4/2009 c5 Waging Wonder
Okay, this is the best written comedy/fantasy fic I have read yet. I swear to god it sounds just like the arguments I had with my brother and sister when we were little, and the mom giving the 'you're the oldest speech' was perfect. I remember that.
Honestly, I didn't think this would be nearly as good as it was, so I salute you.
Keep it up!
Okay, this is the best written comedy/fantasy fic I have read yet. I swear to god it sounds just like the arguments I had with my brother and sister when we were little, and the mom giving the 'you're the oldest speech' was perfect. I remember that.
Honestly, I didn't think this would be nearly as good as it was, so I salute you.
Keep it up!
4/27/2009 c3 
3cutevampire911
hehe! heres a review!
this was actually a pretty good chapter.
it was more serious, but still made me giggle every now and then.
also its good because now were getting back to the part where they ended up in candy land, when they started with the board game.
its a good pace too. not furiously fast, but it keeps things moving along.
good job!
♥!Writers Unite!♥
3cutevampire911hehe! heres a review!
this was actually a pretty good chapter.
it was more serious, but still made me giggle every now and then.
also its good because now were getting back to the part where they ended up in candy land, when they started with the board game.
its a good pace too. not furiously fast, but it keeps things moving along.
good job!
♥!Writers Unite!♥
4/18/2009 c1 cutevampire911
Laugh Out Loud!
Good sense of story writing.
I can see some Foreshadow, fantasty of couse, and comedy, due to the characters annoyance of being stuck in Candy Land.
I hope you are planning to continue on, but I'm pretty sure you are, due to your line of
"Let me tell you how it all began...".
Please mail me back when you have written more to the story and I will gladly take the time to read it. Thanks!
♥!Writers Unite!♥
Laugh Out Loud!
Good sense of story writing.
I can see some Foreshadow, fantasty of couse, and comedy, due to the characters annoyance of being stuck in Candy Land.
I hope you are planning to continue on, but I'm pretty sure you are, due to your line of
"Let me tell you how it all began...".
Please mail me back when you have written more to the story and I will gladly take the time to read it. Thanks!
♥!Writers Unite!♥