for tire swing4/19/2009 c1 
173Little girl Big world
Amazing feelings were displayed in this poem. Like how things didn't really register, the feeling of spinning, and adrenaline rushes. And I loved how you used the color coming into there lives as a metaphor for growing up and maturing. Absolutely loved this poem.
173Little girl Big worldAmazing feelings were displayed in this poem. Like how things didn't really register, the feeling of spinning, and adrenaline rushes. And I loved how you used the color coming into there lives as a metaphor for growing up and maturing. Absolutely loved this poem.
4/19/2009 c1 22effervescent-sentiments
I liked this. :) It definitely felt like fluid motion - like spinning, in fact.
Keep writing!
Jules
22effervescent-sentimentsI liked this. :) It definitely felt like fluid motion - like spinning, in fact.
Keep writing!
Jules