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4/19/2009 c1 9MagicWords
Very good. I good feel the emotion. I like the part about Dusan being so close to her ear, but she was unable to hear him. Very nicely done.
4/19/2009 c1 SatelliteHeart
That is a great short story! It would probably make a good longer story also if that might be something you would want to do. Great job! There are some incorrect words in it though, just so you know like it says class when I think you meant to put glass and a few more within the story. Great job though!

Thanks for the fantastic quick read!

Elizabeth

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