for Buoys6/25/2009 c1 
8Alio Laski
I'm not big on poetry that doesn't rhyme, so I can't really get the flow of this poem... but your message is poignant, and well articulated. Personally on the line that says "Some faintly" I would type the line as "Some faintly, some loudly-but all sounded" for kind of a dramatic pause effect, to drive home your point. Your words are beautiful and effective, even though I can't pick up on the flow of the words. Thanks for sharing it :)
8Alio LaskiI'm not big on poetry that doesn't rhyme, so I can't really get the flow of this poem... but your message is poignant, and well articulated. Personally on the line that says "Some faintly" I would type the line as "Some faintly, some loudly-but all sounded" for kind of a dramatic pause effect, to drive home your point. Your words are beautiful and effective, even though I can't pick up on the flow of the words. Thanks for sharing it :)
4/26/2009 c1 9bayleafstarship
Absolutely divine, my dear. Impeccable imagery and an interesting statement about mankind in general. Have you read Johnny the Homicidal Maniac yet? Because I think you might enjoy just the man's thoughts on humanity.
Very well done :]
9bayleafstarshipAbsolutely divine, my dear. Impeccable imagery and an interesting statement about mankind in general. Have you read Johnny the Homicidal Maniac yet? Because I think you might enjoy just the man's thoughts on humanity.
Very well done :]
4/21/2009 c1 3writing-addict77
Wow...as I read this I thought "Yeah, I'm one of those bouys" This is great...love it so much.
3writing-addict77Wow...as I read this I thought "Yeah, I'm one of those bouys" This is great...love it so much.