for Plan B2/17/2013 c1 HeadOverHeelsInHate
Awww! So freaking cute! That's so adorable! I feel kind of bad for him though. Come on, who really wants to be plan B? I'd love to read more about this couple!
Awww! So freaking cute! That's so adorable! I feel kind of bad for him though. Come on, who really wants to be plan B? I'd love to read more about this couple!
2/14/2013 c1 Vallen
Thanks for sharing this awesome one shot. I loved it! Being a male reader who likes romance pieces, it's actually not that easy to find stories with a male POV, so I am glad I came across your works and am looking forward to reading your other stories.
Thanks for sharing this awesome one shot. I loved it! Being a male reader who likes romance pieces, it's actually not that easy to find stories with a male POV, so I am glad I came across your works and am looking forward to reading your other stories.
11/19/2012 c1 fellintothemoon
Hello! Sorry this has taken so long, I've been a bit busy :( Anyway, your story has been added under the One Shot section of A Drop of Romeo! Yay! Here's your review:
Melissa Thinks: Plan B is different from most one shots in the sense that it was written in the point of view of a male. It revolves around the adorable relationship between two best friends. By giving us a glimpse into the lives of the characters, Plan B sucks you into their relationship in just one scene. The dialogue is not only believable, but it makes you feel as if you’re in the same room with the characters listening in on their conversation. The concept is not quite unique, but it’s still an interesting topic for the author to explore (and she/he does it so well!). Heart-warming is the word I’d use to describe Plan B; bittersweet and tender, it will pull on your heartstrings and keep you engaged until the very end.
Hello! Sorry this has taken so long, I've been a bit busy :( Anyway, your story has been added under the One Shot section of A Drop of Romeo! Yay! Here's your review:
Melissa Thinks: Plan B is different from most one shots in the sense that it was written in the point of view of a male. It revolves around the adorable relationship between two best friends. By giving us a glimpse into the lives of the characters, Plan B sucks you into their relationship in just one scene. The dialogue is not only believable, but it makes you feel as if you’re in the same room with the characters listening in on their conversation. The concept is not quite unique, but it’s still an interesting topic for the author to explore (and she/he does it so well!). Heart-warming is the word I’d use to describe Plan B; bittersweet and tender, it will pull on your heartstrings and keep you engaged until the very end.
11/10/2012 c1 Kismet
I liked this story. A lot. It was a cute, short read that had a content ending. The last sentence, "... No matter what came up, I was plan B." at first seemed wistful, but it fully conveyed the narrator's emotion: that he loved the main character, and just wanted her to be happy.
I liked this story. A lot. It was a cute, short read that had a content ending. The last sentence, "... No matter what came up, I was plan B." at first seemed wistful, but it fully conveyed the narrator's emotion: that he loved the main character, and just wanted her to be happy.
11/8/2012 c1 
4notjustink
I loved this one shot. The heroine was very relatable and admirable, and the guy was super sweet. You put just enough emotion and feeling into the story without it getting sappy. Nice job! :)
4notjustinkI loved this one shot. The heroine was very relatable and admirable, and the guy was super sweet. You put just enough emotion and feeling into the story without it getting sappy. Nice job! :)
8/27/2012 c1 Guest
:) 3
:) 3
8/13/2012 c1 32The Siege
awww this is so sweet, if a bit melancholy. gordon is too awesome to be plan b!
now i will go wallow in self-pity because i don't have a gordon who would definitely be my plan a :D
32The Siegeawww this is so sweet, if a bit melancholy. gordon is too awesome to be plan b!
now i will go wallow in self-pity because i don't have a gordon who would definitely be my plan a :D
8/12/2012 c1 benzene
Refreshing story line. I saw one verb tense that was off. Blew instead of blown. I can't wait to read your longer story.
Refreshing story line. I saw one verb tense that was off. Blew instead of blown. I can't wait to read your longer story.
4/30/2011 c1 Admins Pls Delete Me
Who could not like Italian food? Seriously, I love Italian food!
This is a really sweet and cute story :). I like how he'll be her "plan B", it's just really...sweet. (wow, look at my extensive vocabulary!) Sorry, I can't come up with anything better than sweet and cute (I must have hit my head when I fell off my bike in the parking lot...). You're really good at writing! Keep up the good work!
Who could not like Italian food? Seriously, I love Italian food!
This is a really sweet and cute story :). I like how he'll be her "plan B", it's just really...sweet. (wow, look at my extensive vocabulary!) Sorry, I can't come up with anything better than sweet and cute (I must have hit my head when I fell off my bike in the parking lot...). You're really good at writing! Keep up the good work!
7/13/2010 c1 5nexia
Ah the I-will-marry-you-if-no-one-else-will angle. I liked it :) I especially liked how you portrayed Gordan and Carmen's relationship. They aren't lovey-dovey, but they're there for each other.
I know some people want a sequel, but I say you should leave it as is. I actually loved that it wasn't sappy. Oddly enough, it makes me want to write a bitterweet ending... or a tragedy... Either way, kudos to you. You're an inspiration. Hehe.
5nexiaAh the I-will-marry-you-if-no-one-else-will angle. I liked it :) I especially liked how you portrayed Gordan and Carmen's relationship. They aren't lovey-dovey, but they're there for each other.
I know some people want a sequel, but I say you should leave it as is. I actually loved that it wasn't sappy. Oddly enough, it makes me want to write a bitterweet ending... or a tragedy... Either way, kudos to you. You're an inspiration. Hehe.
3/17/2010 c1 3Cookie dough addict
Hey one-san!
J'ai adoré ton one-shot! T'ai plus corny que j'le pensais...
Anyways, j'ai hâte de lire tes oeuvres d'art! MUAHAHAHA!(c'est comme ça que tu l'écris pas "MWUAHAHAHA" mais bel et bien "MUAHAHAHA!)
J'ai hâte de te relire!
3Cookie dough addictHey one-san!
J'ai adoré ton one-shot! T'ai plus corny que j'le pensais...
Anyways, j'ai hâte de lire tes oeuvres d'art! MUAHAHAHA!(c'est comme ça que tu l'écris pas "MWUAHAHAHA" mais bel et bien "MUAHAHAHA!)
J'ai hâte de te relire!