for Wild Garden4/22/2009 c1 
9WinMyHeart5444
Haha I like how dark it is! I love how you used the garden as a metaphor, you did an awesome job pulling it off too. A lot of people can't do it. Definately keep writing because you are amazing!
9WinMyHeart5444Haha I like how dark it is! I love how you used the garden as a metaphor, you did an awesome job pulling it off too. A lot of people can't do it. Definately keep writing because you are amazing!
4/22/2009 c1 Ashi
Quite a good job! I like the irony in that the narrorator does not want an trimmed garden for their place to have breathing room, but an unrestrained garden. Thanks for stepping away from the stereotype in untamed plants choking the life from things and instead offering consolance... Overall, great poem!
Quite a good job! I like the irony in that the narrorator does not want an trimmed garden for their place to have breathing room, but an unrestrained garden. Thanks for stepping away from the stereotype in untamed plants choking the life from things and instead offering consolance... Overall, great poem!