for Just My Luck7/5/2009 c5 
2xdinoxcorex
Aw, Allie's starting to like him! Cute :)
And very well written, I might add. Good job!
2xdinoxcorexAw, Allie's starting to like him! Cute :)
And very well written, I might add. Good job!
6/28/2009 c5 23frogs of war
I liked it. His friends' teasing was friendly and I only thought, 'ouch, what a low blow' once. I could see how his behavior towards Chase was really over the top in their eyes, although to Alexis it is all very rational.
23frogs of warI liked it. His friends' teasing was friendly and I only thought, 'ouch, what a low blow' once. I could see how his behavior towards Chase was really over the top in their eyes, although to Alexis it is all very rational.
6/28/2009 c5 2Rae Simmons
You changed it... I think I like this one better but it doesn't fit it entirely, not just yet. It was an interesting chappy to say the least. Chase is a bit of a perv though, no?
2Rae SimmonsYou changed it... I think I like this one better but it doesn't fit it entirely, not just yet. It was an interesting chappy to say the least. Chase is a bit of a perv though, no?
6/17/2009 c4 6CrimsonLilly
I just love Alexis more and more! And the germ phobia and any other phobia he has up his sleeve. I loved the showering scene(nope, not a pervert *shifty eyes*) and his helpless tries to ignore the grime and whatnot. heh heh He's a bigger girl than Latoya! And he makes it look cute! And that's just not fair, damnit. He definitely needs Chase to give him more manliness than-reads the 'script'-or not... Oh well, even if he gets girlier than he is, I'll still love him. He's just so fresh, like a breath of fresh air in all the stories floating around the cyber space...No matter how cheesy that sounds. And I can't wait to see if Chase is really a murdering rapist *gasps* or not ;) I hope to see much more of Chase and his...guitar? ^-^
6CrimsonLillyI just love Alexis more and more! And the germ phobia and any other phobia he has up his sleeve. I loved the showering scene(nope, not a pervert *shifty eyes*) and his helpless tries to ignore the grime and whatnot. heh heh He's a bigger girl than Latoya! And he makes it look cute! And that's just not fair, damnit. He definitely needs Chase to give him more manliness than-reads the 'script'-or not... Oh well, even if he gets girlier than he is, I'll still love him. He's just so fresh, like a breath of fresh air in all the stories floating around the cyber space...No matter how cheesy that sounds. And I can't wait to see if Chase is really a murdering rapist *gasps* or not ;) I hope to see much more of Chase and his...guitar? ^-^
6/15/2009 c1 2Chibbi Nations Ruler
Whoa, paranoia much? i don't think I'll ever touch cheese fries again(at least not today). But that's beside the point. I have to say that i don't quite get much yet, but it is only the beginning of the story. I'll be reading more so DON'T WORRY. i think i'm on the verge of being your 'dedicated fan' =)
~Neo
2Chibbi Nations RulerWhoa, paranoia much? i don't think I'll ever touch cheese fries again(at least not today). But that's beside the point. I have to say that i don't quite get much yet, but it is only the beginning of the story. I'll be reading more so DON'T WORRY. i think i'm on the verge of being your 'dedicated fan' =)
~Neo
6/11/2009 c4 23frogs of war
Latoya and Cameron know what Alexis is like, they shouldn't complain so much. They have to know it won't do any good.
I'm glad Chase showed up. Maybe Alexis will want to change his habits now, but if Chase joins the complaining chorus, Alexis might get even more defensive and stubborn. Maybe Chase will have eloquent facial expressions.
This paragraph: '“You wanted the bed.” I slap my forehead.' sounds like Alexis said the quote, but it was Cameron, wasn't it? Maybe if the quote was attached to the preceding sentence...?
I look forward to seeing how Alexis changes, but I'm not expecting miracles any time soon.
23frogs of warLatoya and Cameron know what Alexis is like, they shouldn't complain so much. They have to know it won't do any good.
I'm glad Chase showed up. Maybe Alexis will want to change his habits now, but if Chase joins the complaining chorus, Alexis might get even more defensive and stubborn. Maybe Chase will have eloquent facial expressions.
This paragraph: '“You wanted the bed.” I slap my forehead.' sounds like Alexis said the quote, but it was Cameron, wasn't it? Maybe if the quote was attached to the preceding sentence...?
I look forward to seeing how Alexis changes, but I'm not expecting miracles any time soon.
6/11/2009 c4 kepteinen
Okay. I guess Alexis' got OCD or something, but you write it.. oddly. Not bad, just different than most other writers. Great chapter, Chase seems awesome.
Okay. I guess Alexis' got OCD or something, but you write it.. oddly. Not bad, just different than most other writers. Great chapter, Chase seems awesome.
6/4/2009 c3 frogs of war
With friends like these...
I hope you find time soon to write, because your characters are interesting and I'm looking forward to learning what happens to them.
With friends like these...
I hope you find time soon to write, because your characters are interesting and I'm looking forward to learning what happens to them.
6/1/2009 c3 2Rae Simmons
OMG WOW. I am so clueless. I can't believe I didn't realize Alexis and Cameron were guys till this chapter. wow. oops. ^.^;
2Rae SimmonsOMG WOW. I am so clueless. I can't believe I didn't realize Alexis and Cameron were guys till this chapter. wow. oops. ^.^;
5/31/2009 c3 2xdinoxcorex
I really like this story :) Alexis is such a priss hahahaha. When I heard the name I thought he was a girl, but then I was like wait, slash story...Hahahaha, anyway
Update soon?
2xdinoxcorexI really like this story :) Alexis is such a priss hahahaha. When I heard the name I thought he was a girl, but then I was like wait, slash story...Hahahaha, anyway
Update soon?
5/31/2009 c3 6CrimsonLilly
*rolling on the floor laughing*
...You're...killing...me!
Al is so frigin adorable in his...strange teenage ways? The sound of the see..wahahaha...okay,I admit I like those sounds,but-for making me fall asleep!
I...hahaha...can't believe...waahaha...he jumped in his seat! He's amazing! Can't wait to see how this road trip ends for him. Oh and I'm guessing he was the one who got them lost,even though he claims he knows how to read a map? Keep going with this,it's becoming more and more interesting!
6CrimsonLilly*rolling on the floor laughing*
...You're...killing...me!
Al is so frigin adorable in his...strange teenage ways? The sound of the see..wahahaha...okay,I admit I like those sounds,but-for making me fall asleep!
I...hahaha...can't believe...waahaha...he jumped in his seat! He's amazing! Can't wait to see how this road trip ends for him. Oh and I'm guessing he was the one who got them lost,even though he claims he knows how to read a map? Keep going with this,it's becoming more and more interesting!
5/9/2009 c2 crack the sky
it seems really interesting, tbh. alexis is so... anal, haha. anally lovable, though :D
it seems really interesting, tbh. alexis is so... anal, haha. anally lovable, though :D