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5/2/2009 c1 173Little girl Big world
Very nice.

"My wounds are beginning to heal

You come back

With your words

That are stained with my tears"

Just wonderful lines! And a powerful ending. Great job!
4/29/2009 c1 81BedHead-RedHead
That was so powerful that it was chilling- in a good way! Very smooth and precise, as usual! I like it, the words are really...graceful? For lack of a better word :) Loved it all, especially "My wounds are beginning to heal/You come back/With you words/That are stained with my tears" That one was the ringer line! Nice work! :)
4/26/2009 c1 4HighOnBrokenWings
It was short, but effective because of it! I loved the end

"But you won’t end my misery

Because you can’t hurt me

If I’m gone"

The whole thing was amazing, as always. Great work :)

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