for One Isn't Enough5/2/2009 c1 
173Little girl Big world
Very nice.
"My wounds are beginning to heal
You come back
With your words
That are stained with my tears"
Just wonderful lines! And a powerful ending. Great job!
173Little girl Big worldVery nice.
"My wounds are beginning to heal
You come back
With your words
That are stained with my tears"
Just wonderful lines! And a powerful ending. Great job!
4/29/2009 c1 81BedHead-RedHead
That was so powerful that it was chilling- in a good way! Very smooth and precise, as usual! I like it, the words are really...graceful? For lack of a better word :) Loved it all, especially "My wounds are beginning to heal/You come back/With you words/That are stained with my tears" That one was the ringer line! Nice work! :)
81BedHead-RedHeadThat was so powerful that it was chilling- in a good way! Very smooth and precise, as usual! I like it, the words are really...graceful? For lack of a better word :) Loved it all, especially "My wounds are beginning to heal/You come back/With you words/That are stained with my tears" That one was the ringer line! Nice work! :)
4/26/2009 c1 4HighOnBrokenWings
It was short, but effective because of it! I loved the end
"But you won’t end my misery
Because you can’t hurt me
If I’m gone"
The whole thing was amazing, as always. Great work :)
4HighOnBrokenWingsIt was short, but effective because of it! I loved the end
"But you won’t end my misery
Because you can’t hurt me
If I’m gone"
The whole thing was amazing, as always. Great work :)