for Persephone's Return to the Above4/26/2009 c1 
1No Longer An Account
Excellent!
Except for the last verce, it kept a steady rythm and meter, which I really liked; too many people abuse free verse these days.
It's pretty obviously Frost-derivative, but you definately made it your own; kudos. And of course I'm a sucker for nature poems.
1No Longer An AccountExcellent!
Except for the last verce, it kept a steady rythm and meter, which I really liked; too many people abuse free verse these days.
It's pretty obviously Frost-derivative, but you definately made it your own; kudos. And of course I'm a sucker for nature poems.