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8/3/2015 c1 Dani McLean
This was really good. The way you chose to rhyme gave it an interesting flow.
6/17/2009 c1 17sunday night sky
i like the fifth stanza best - really pretty imagery. nice structure and rhythm, interesting :) also like the concept. very good! :D
4/28/2009 c1 10LeilaniBlue
this is amazing:)
4/27/2009 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
Very nice, I enjoyed your rhyming scheme. the first two stanza's were wonderful. Keep up the good work.

Much love,

Juliet.

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