for For I Have Sinned8/19/2013 c3 HandsomeDevil
Im really sad this hasn't been updated yet :( I really really love it so far. Coen really interests me siiiigh. I hope you magically remember this story & come back to it. I think I've reread that little bit about a thousand times already. You stopped at the worst part. If Micah actually called Coen to save him & he goes to save him & just ugh i wish you'd continue.
Im really sad this hasn't been updated yet :( I really really love it so far. Coen really interests me siiiigh. I hope you magically remember this story & come back to it. I think I've reread that little bit about a thousand times already. You stopped at the worst part. If Micah actually called Coen to save him & he goes to save him & just ugh i wish you'd continue.
2/21/2013 c3 
4GrangerDanger333
Aw man. I was liking this story but I could see that if it was going to go anywhere good it would have required dedication and loads of time spent on it. I enjoyed the first two chapters and would read more if you ever tried to have another go at it, but I understand :)
4GrangerDanger333Aw man. I was liking this story but I could see that if it was going to go anywhere good it would have required dedication and loads of time spent on it. I enjoyed the first two chapters and would read more if you ever tried to have another go at it, but I understand :)
8/14/2012 c1 wynnebat
This is an amazing start to a story, and I love the characters you've created. They feel like real, fleshed-out people. I'm sad that you won't be updating the story, but happy that I read these two chapters because they're really awesome.
This is an amazing start to a story, and I love the characters you've created. They feel like real, fleshed-out people. I'm sad that you won't be updating the story, but happy that I read these two chapters because they're really awesome.
12/29/2011 c2 4OnceUponAFeudalFairytale
I have to say, I really enjoyed reading this story as well. Coen is absolutely adorable!
4OnceUponAFeudalFairytaleI have to say, I really enjoyed reading this story as well. Coen is absolutely adorable!
8/20/2011 c3 39Raaawr Ima Dinosaur
NOOOO! I was totally into this! I'm so dissapointed that this might not be continued! I really hope you do. I'm dying to see what happened next, especially since you ended chapter two as you did.
39Raaawr Ima DinosaurNOOOO! I was totally into this! I'm so dissapointed that this might not be continued! I really hope you do. I'm dying to see what happened next, especially since you ended chapter two as you did.
1/2/2011 c3 tell it to the sky
i really hope that you will be able to continue with this now!
i loved Addie and Tira and then there sequel, and Micah so so cool!
i really hope that you will be able to continue with this now!
i loved Addie and Tira and then there sequel, and Micah so so cool!
7/11/2010 c2 1Handsome Devil
Also, I don't think I can say anything to Micah about Tria disapproving now. Ha. He's helping him. And so is Addison. How surprising. Living on the wildside, eh? And I really didn't expect that Bryce would get Micah instead, but he did mention that he was good, eh? I was hoping that somehow Coen would save Micah. But now that I see the extent of his nerves and anxiety, I doubt he could save anyone. Doubt that a lot. And how exactly would he come to the rescue anyway? It's not likely that he would randomly leave the apartment at 4 in the morning for a coincidental walk in the same place Bryce and Micah are. Haha.
1Handsome DevilAlso, I don't think I can say anything to Micah about Tria disapproving now. Ha. He's helping him. And so is Addison. How surprising. Living on the wildside, eh? And I really didn't expect that Bryce would get Micah instead, but he did mention that he was good, eh? I was hoping that somehow Coen would save Micah. But now that I see the extent of his nerves and anxiety, I doubt he could save anyone. Doubt that a lot. And how exactly would he come to the rescue anyway? It's not likely that he would randomly leave the apartment at 4 in the morning for a coincidental walk in the same place Bryce and Micah are. Haha.
7/11/2010 c3 Handsome Devil
N o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o! When I noticed that the third chapter said "Notice". I knew it would say something like this. Too bad, this is your BEST story. I'm sad that you don't have the "steam" to finish it. I'll be crying in the corner... just letting you know.
So I hope someone else decides to write this with you. Really hope. I wouldn't mind doing it but I'm not very reliable so I won't step in. Ha. I have trouble keeping up with things myself, so I hope you do find someone and maybe they can give you more ideas that would inspire you. Good luck. Hope you're back soon.
N o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o o! When I noticed that the third chapter said "Notice". I knew it would say something like this. Too bad, this is your BEST story. I'm sad that you don't have the "steam" to finish it. I'll be crying in the corner... just letting you know.
So I hope someone else decides to write this with you. Really hope. I wouldn't mind doing it but I'm not very reliable so I won't step in. Ha. I have trouble keeping up with things myself, so I hope you do find someone and maybe they can give you more ideas that would inspire you. Good luck. Hope you're back soon.
7/11/2010 c1 Handsome Devil
Aww, how cute in a sick, really scary way. And I love it that Coen's just as scary apparently. Why do they both have weapons and stuff? Hmm. Very interesting. I didn't look at the genre or anything. Ha. Maybe this is action? ;)
And this is Micah from your other story, correct? It's funny how Tria saw him getting into all kinds of trouble and here he is doing what they thought. :D
Aww, how cute in a sick, really scary way. And I love it that Coen's just as scary apparently. Why do they both have weapons and stuff? Hmm. Very interesting. I didn't look at the genre or anything. Ha. Maybe this is action? ;)
And this is Micah from your other story, correct? It's funny how Tria saw him getting into all kinds of trouble and here he is doing what they thought. :D
5/12/2010 c3 16Lize16
I'd co-write with you if it meant you continued to write this amazing story. I have to warn you, I won't be able to write as amazingly as you but I'd still love to give it a try.
16Lize16I'd co-write with you if it meant you continued to write this amazing story. I have to warn you, I won't be able to write as amazingly as you but I'd still love to give it a try.
2/2/2010 c2 letyoursoultakeflight
Nice =] I like how Addie and Tria get a mention! And m to brownies...
Nice =] I like how Addie and Tria get a mention! And m to brownies...