for Face It9/30/2015 c1 Be-ya
Ok this may be too superficial to ask but how can he receive such a huge damage while turning to a corner? Aren't you supposed to slow down when you make turns? Unless the other car was running on fast speed which I doubt since you don't place libraries on highways. And if the library was indeed along a road where cars can speed up and Noah was turning a corner, that means it should've been him to receive more damage. It means it should've been him who died.
Or is this part of the plot? :O
Will wait for the update.
Ok this may be too superficial to ask but how can he receive such a huge damage while turning to a corner? Aren't you supposed to slow down when you make turns? Unless the other car was running on fast speed which I doubt since you don't place libraries on highways. And if the library was indeed along a road where cars can speed up and Noah was turning a corner, that means it should've been him to receive more damage. It means it should've been him who died.
Or is this part of the plot? :O
Will wait for the update.
5/23/2015 c1 
2Fobbster
Yes, I get how awkward he is, no need to ask.
Are you going to update anytime this leap quartet?
2FobbsterYes, I get how awkward he is, no need to ask.
Are you going to update anytime this leap quartet?
11/4/2014 c1 nawakosaure
Well I would love to see how this goes...
If you ever decide to write it down, I sure will be following it !
Well I would love to see how this goes...
If you ever decide to write it down, I sure will be following it !
7/6/2013 c1 4GrangerDanger333
I hope you come back to this and other stories that you've left unfinished for a while now. They have a lot of potential! I understand the difficulties in motivating yourself to write and the trials of writer's block! Urgh! But really, you're talented :D
I think you did manage to convey the awkwardness of the characters which is happily setting up the story for future chapters where stuff goes wrong for him and he gets confused and gets on very awkwardly.. I'm looking forward to it!
Good luck with your writing! D
4GrangerDanger333I hope you come back to this and other stories that you've left unfinished for a while now. They have a lot of potential! I understand the difficulties in motivating yourself to write and the trials of writer's block! Urgh! But really, you're talented :D
I think you did manage to convey the awkwardness of the characters which is happily setting up the story for future chapters where stuff goes wrong for him and he gets confused and gets on very awkwardly.. I'm looking forward to it!
Good luck with your writing! D
6/30/2013 c1 70Naver
"Woh."
-(This is a must read)
"I'm at a lost for words as this is just like me in everyway, with the feelings."
-Amazing.
70Naver"Woh."
-(This is a must read)
"I'm at a lost for words as this is just like me in everyway, with the feelings."
-Amazing.
9/9/2012 c1 pickle-tan
It's really interesting so far. 8D And yeah, it would definitely make an awesome TV show. (The shows nowadays are horrible, to say the least. ;;)
It's really interesting so far. 8D And yeah, it would definitely make an awesome TV show. (The shows nowadays are horrible, to say the least. ;;)
4/3/2012 c1 2PhrasesForTheYoung
woah this is an awesome concept, it's sort of like a book i read once called air head, except they put her brain in a celebrities body blah blah blah.But yeah continue!
2PhrasesForTheYoungwoah this is an awesome concept, it's sort of like a book i read once called air head, except they put her brain in a celebrities body blah blah blah.But yeah continue!
2/8/2012 c1 jaskolka
All your stories have fantastic ideas behind them and this one is no exception. You could say that this would be a very particular case of ugly duckling turning swan. Especially the insight into how our appearance relates to self confidence and thus reflects on other talents and skills sets us up for an intriguing read.
Moreover, I really love awkward, vulnerable but kind hearted characters so Noah hit the bull's eye for me. He is so... huggable.
I have a feeling that I would tremendously enjoy listening to his voice while he would narrate this story.
Finally, add to this UST, slash and (assumingly) sexy rival. Ugh, see what you do to me! Now my head is full of slashy fantasies concerning this story and there is nothing I can do about it! Ahhh, the everlasting frustration. It pains me to see this splendid idea being abandoned.
I hope that one day you will come back here and take it up again. Best wishes:)
All your stories have fantastic ideas behind them and this one is no exception. You could say that this would be a very particular case of ugly duckling turning swan. Especially the insight into how our appearance relates to self confidence and thus reflects on other talents and skills sets us up for an intriguing read.
Moreover, I really love awkward, vulnerable but kind hearted characters so Noah hit the bull's eye for me. He is so... huggable.
I have a feeling that I would tremendously enjoy listening to his voice while he would narrate this story.
Finally, add to this UST, slash and (assumingly) sexy rival. Ugh, see what you do to me! Now my head is full of slashy fantasies concerning this story and there is nothing I can do about it! Ahhh, the everlasting frustration. It pains me to see this splendid idea being abandoned.
I hope that one day you will come back here and take it up again. Best wishes:)
9/18/2011 c1 Miss Master
Oh please update this story!
It sounds really good and I noticed that your other WIP (State of Unconsciousness) is gone?... Damn. I really loved that one too.
I'm enjoying this story and where it leads so I do hope you continue to write this. :):):)
Oh please update this story!
It sounds really good and I noticed that your other WIP (State of Unconsciousness) is gone?... Damn. I really loved that one too.
I'm enjoying this story and where it leads so I do hope you continue to write this. :):):)
7/21/2011 c1 Gaaras Beloved
wow this is a really good story. i would be happy to read much much more!
wow this is a really good story. i would be happy to read much much more!
2/21/2011 c1 Moonboots
If you're still writing this story, I'd love to read more!
It's got a really interesting intro to the plot so far, and I'm curious as to what happens next!
P-poor Noah ;_; /cheers for him
If you're still writing this story, I'd love to read more!
It's got a really interesting intro to the plot so far, and I'm curious as to what happens next!
P-poor Noah ;_; /cheers for him