
5/2/2009 c1 Chibko
Very fascinating premise. Reminds me a bit of the manga Pretty Face, in terms of accidents and reconstructive surgery. Of course, this is more interesting than that manga... And I can't wait to read more. The way Noah talks about himself is rather sad... but hopefully he won't be so harsh about himself forever.
Very fascinating premise. Reminds me a bit of the manga Pretty Face, in terms of accidents and reconstructive surgery. Of course, this is more interesting than that manga... And I can't wait to read more. The way Noah talks about himself is rather sad... but hopefully he won't be so harsh about himself forever.
4/30/2009 c1 bookfreakazoid
nice i like this new idea keep it up!
nice i like this new idea keep it up!
4/30/2009 c1
23plumblossom
One of my favorite books growing up was _Double Star_ by Heinlein. If you know about that book, you'll know why I'm eager to see where you go with this.

One of my favorite books growing up was _Double Star_ by Heinlein. If you know about that book, you'll know why I'm eager to see where you go with this.
4/30/2009 c1 Captain Catharsis
O, a new one. I admit I was rather excited to see an update in my inbox, and thus far I haven't been disappointed. It's a tad different from your usual style, but it's nice to go off the beaten path every so often, and it's very engaging and interesting. I look forward to more chapters.
O, a new one. I admit I was rather excited to see an update in my inbox, and thus far I haven't been disappointed. It's a tad different from your usual style, but it's nice to go off the beaten path every so often, and it's very engaging and interesting. I look forward to more chapters.
4/29/2009 c1 DefineNightmare
The story is very unique. And the TV thing? It's their lost, they're missing on some good slash goodness!
please update sooN!
The story is very unique. And the TV thing? It's their lost, they're missing on some good slash goodness!
please update sooN!
4/29/2009 c1 Clazziquai Project
O! Please do continue! I really like the concept behind this story so far. I don't think I've read anything quite like it. I feel awfully bad for the Lukas guy though. xD
O! Please do continue! I really like the concept behind this story so far. I don't think I've read anything quite like it. I feel awfully bad for the Lukas guy though. xD
4/29/2009 c1
14Tonberry Surprise
I really like this plot so far, even though it's just the prologue. It got me a little pumped to see the first chapter ^.~

I really like this plot so far, even though it's just the prologue. It got me a little pumped to see the first chapter ^.~
4/29/2009 c1 Ama
such a good idea- I really can't wait to see more.
such a good idea- I really can't wait to see more.
4/29/2009 c1
1shadylight
This looks like a really interesting story XD I'm definitely looking forward to more! :D

This looks like a really interesting story XD I'm definitely looking forward to more! :D
4/29/2009 c1
1kaigrey
so 1) i love this character already. I was barely looking at it, distracted by some emo thoughts and then as he was describing himself I was caught. He sounds just like me. I CAN IDENTIFY! :D (Thats my thought process when reading...uh...whee).
2) I love your language and the voice in this. The last two sentences in particular are amazing.
Thank you and I cant wait to read more!

so 1) i love this character already. I was barely looking at it, distracted by some emo thoughts and then as he was describing himself I was caught. He sounds just like me. I CAN IDENTIFY! :D (Thats my thought process when reading...uh...whee).
2) I love your language and the voice in this. The last two sentences in particular are amazing.
Thank you and I cant wait to read more!
4/29/2009 c1 ddz008
Interesting first chapter! I think you have a good idea with this... now I'll have to wait to see where you are planning to take this. Hope you update soon! :)
Interesting first chapter! I think you have a good idea with this... now I'll have to wait to see where you are planning to take this. Hope you update soon! :)