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4/29/2009 c1 cobraqueen17
I'll bite. It's decently original at least I haven't seen an idea like it.
4/29/2009 c1 allyoucaneater
Well... he's awkward sounding alright... I would say that he's being too hard on himself, but then again, I dont know how he 'really' look like, self explained looks pushed back, aside from the obvious things like him being a red head and his height...

The ending's nice and the narration went smoothly.

Nice quote at the bottom, by the way.

p.s: more please :D
4/29/2009 c1 12effay
i wish producers would do that too because this WOULD make a kick ass tv show but don't worry - it's just as good as a story going on what i've read so far. it's really interesting and as geeky as it is, i like reading sci-fi stuff and this has definitely got me. and don't worry, you conveyed the awkwardness well. tbh, it kinda sounds like me somewhat...ish. though maybe not AS awkward but YEAH :D haha, please continue writing, it's definitely got loads of potential :]

xo, effay.
4/29/2009 c1 alexa87
I like the Prologue quite depressing but I hope it will get better. ^^
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