for Someone New4/29/2009 c1 Ashi
Ohh, good job. You seem to have been taking your time getting over this (reference to some of your other poems), but you will hear no complains from me if it spawns poetry! I like how you say "all you ever did was burn," and then at the end contenue that "your fire's burning low." Overall, lovely poem dear.
Ohh, good job. You seem to have been taking your time getting over this (reference to some of your other poems), but you will hear no complains from me if it spawns poetry! I like how you say "all you ever did was burn," and then at the end contenue that "your fire's burning low." Overall, lovely poem dear.