for Burning Down6/1/2014 c10 roxceedel
Why? Why do people start something and not finish? You even commented a way back that YOU don't understand why write a chapter, get tons of reviews, then stop! ...seriously?
Why? Why do people start something and not finish? You even commented a way back that YOU don't understand why write a chapter, get tons of reviews, then stop! ...seriously?
2/19/2013 c3 enislola
I absolutely LOVE these stories! And the guys, well they are amazing.
But I think that this chapter really points out the lack of a backbone and growth in Cadyn. He is obviously a worrier and that's okay, but he has his brother's love now, so why can't he share his insecurities and problems with him? Instead of avoiding him and making it all worse? God I just want to smack him- seriously! Could he please grow up a bit?
You Effay are a very skilled writer, and especially good at pacing. You bring out a great deal of emotion in me as your reader. I started reading sbppoas yesterday and haven't reviewed before this- I was too busy devouring your work:-)
I absolutely LOVE these stories! And the guys, well they are amazing.
But I think that this chapter really points out the lack of a backbone and growth in Cadyn. He is obviously a worrier and that's okay, but he has his brother's love now, so why can't he share his insecurities and problems with him? Instead of avoiding him and making it all worse? God I just want to smack him- seriously! Could he please grow up a bit?
You Effay are a very skilled writer, and especially good at pacing. You bring out a great deal of emotion in me as your reader. I started reading sbppoas yesterday and haven't reviewed before this- I was too busy devouring your work:-)
11/1/2012 c10 Guest
I like the story so far and hope that one day you will finish.
I like the story so far and hope that one day you will finish.
1/14/2012 c10 NocturnalOtaku
Ahh the chapters stopped. Do you think you will update soon. I hope sp. This story is really good. You're a great writer. Keep it up
Ahh the chapters stopped. Do you think you will update soon. I hope sp. This story is really good. You're a great writer. Keep it up
12/28/2011 c10 
22my poor toaster
Cmon! Wheres the reeest?
Update soon! I know that its been like years but you just HAVE to end it somehow. I mean it would mean the WORLD to me please?
22my poor toasterCmon! Wheres the reeest?
Update soon! I know that its been like years but you just HAVE to end it somehow. I mean it would mean the WORLD to me please?
5/6/2011 c10 27x-ClinicallyInsane-x
I request that you stop taking time to think and update this.
That is all.
27x-ClinicallyInsane-xI request that you stop taking time to think and update this.
That is all.
1/15/2011 c10 midgetslove4never
Hey...there's something i need you to do that will make me very very happy...UPDATE! i love your story alot! this chapter was great, it made me laugh a bit at how you showed Garen just completely losing his cool and showing more of his desperate side. i loved it and i wanna know whats going to happen with that whore Kelsey so update, idc if the last time you did it was in 2009, its 2011 and this will be a great New Year's present to me! lol jk, but please update! v(^_^)v
Hey...there's something i need you to do that will make me very very happy...UPDATE! i love your story alot! this chapter was great, it made me laugh a bit at how you showed Garen just completely losing his cool and showing more of his desperate side. i loved it and i wanna know whats going to happen with that whore Kelsey so update, idc if the last time you did it was in 2009, its 2011 and this will be a great New Year's present to me! lol jk, but please update! v(^_^)v
7/26/2010 c10 6burrito-meat
awesome story and i totally get you with the feeling about not being able to write just take your time and do everything that you have to do to continue this story
i just wish there would be some smex lol i'm such a perv but all in all this is an awesome story i love garen and cadyn they are hot and funny and i love the drama between them
6burrito-meatawesome story and i totally get you with the feeling about not being able to write just take your time and do everything that you have to do to continue this story
i just wish there would be some smex lol i'm such a perv but all in all this is an awesome story i love garen and cadyn they are hot and funny and i love the drama between them
2/3/2010 c10 awesomeness
omg what happens next? please update soon!
i'll love you forever more +.+
omg what happens next? please update soon!
i'll love you forever more +.+