for Burning Down5/30/2009 c3 
2Chibbi Nations Ruler
Yay, you updated! hope your exams went well.
I think i was squealing with the scene of them in bed! it's so cute! i'm looking forward to Garen's reaction to Cadyn meeting Derek and him coming to movie night.
You still rock! update soon =]
2Chibbi Nations RulerYay, you updated! hope your exams went well.
I think i was squealing with the scene of them in bed! it's so cute! i'm looking forward to Garen's reaction to Cadyn meeting Derek and him coming to movie night.
You still rock! update soon =]
5/17/2009 c2 1Desaki Akan
OMGOMGOMG! I am late reading, I hope you can forgive me! I have been a very lazy reader, I'm sorry! I missed the first chapter so I'll just go ahead and say it was awesome. And this is going to sound really weird, but Garen reminds me of my boyfriend...creepy, I know. But it's just in the way he thinks Cadyn's too cautious, and the way he keeps kissing him and stuff when he's trying to do something that reminds me of my boy. It makes it easy for me to be in Cadyn's mindset =) Since discovering this story, I've read several more brotherxbrother fics, but I'm happy to say that none of them matched up to your GarenxCadyn stories =D I'm sorry you week was bad, I hope the exams go quickly so you can be happy and writing again.
-Desaki
1Desaki AkanOMGOMGOMG! I am late reading, I hope you can forgive me! I have been a very lazy reader, I'm sorry! I missed the first chapter so I'll just go ahead and say it was awesome. And this is going to sound really weird, but Garen reminds me of my boyfriend...creepy, I know. But it's just in the way he thinks Cadyn's too cautious, and the way he keeps kissing him and stuff when he's trying to do something that reminds me of my boy. It makes it easy for me to be in Cadyn's mindset =) Since discovering this story, I've read several more brotherxbrother fics, but I'm happy to say that none of them matched up to your GarenxCadyn stories =D I'm sorry you week was bad, I hope the exams go quickly so you can be happy and writing again.
-Desaki
5/13/2009 c2 6CrimsonLilly
I know I'm kinda late considering I always review it basically the moment you put it up, but I finally got to it ^-^ I really like how this is going, both of them crazy in love, with Garen as the childishly addicted one and Cadyn, the more mature, more responsibly addicted one :) They make me go constantly into an 'aw' mode. I just can't help it. They're :that: cute. Keep up the good work, as usual ;) Oh and, I can't wait to see what you got in store for Derek and our cute boys...heh heh...
6CrimsonLillyI know I'm kinda late considering I always review it basically the moment you put it up, but I finally got to it ^-^ I really like how this is going, both of them crazy in love, with Garen as the childishly addicted one and Cadyn, the more mature, more responsibly addicted one :) They make me go constantly into an 'aw' mode. I just can't help it. They're :that: cute. Keep up the good work, as usual ;) Oh and, I can't wait to see what you got in store for Derek and our cute boys...heh heh...
5/11/2009 c2 2Chibbi Nations Ruler
Ah! this plot is just THE best Yaoi Twinsest I've read (and yea i have read this stuff before...) Sorry for not reviewing on earlier chapters/previous Story, but i have this tendency to read everything before leaving a review.
What can i say? you have got to be one heck of a talented writer, that's for sure. i love the way the story smoothly progresses. Something i find irritating is when people jump from one thing to another(though i have that issue). I really like the characters for the twins too, Cadyn is super sweet and Garen's really funny. I also like the way you narrate the story, so it holds the person's attention.
All in all, this story is just awesome, and I'll definitely be reading some of your other stories while waiting for you to update this one, which i hope will be soon. =]
~Neo
2Chibbi Nations RulerAh! this plot is just THE best Yaoi Twinsest I've read (and yea i have read this stuff before...) Sorry for not reviewing on earlier chapters/previous Story, but i have this tendency to read everything before leaving a review.
What can i say? you have got to be one heck of a talented writer, that's for sure. i love the way the story smoothly progresses. Something i find irritating is when people jump from one thing to another(though i have that issue). I really like the characters for the twins too, Cadyn is super sweet and Garen's really funny. I also like the way you narrate the story, so it holds the person's attention.
All in all, this story is just awesome, and I'll definitely be reading some of your other stories while waiting for you to update this one, which i hope will be soon. =]
~Neo
5/9/2009 c2 2xdinoxcorex
Ahh, I love it! Garen's impatient, but I can understand his pain hahaha.
I really hope your exams go well, though! Take as much time as you want, hon.
2xdinoxcorexAhh, I love it! Garen's impatient, but I can understand his pain hahaha.
I really hope your exams go well, though! Take as much time as you want, hon.
5/8/2009 c2 calamity jane
Ugh (head desk) poor G & C can't get any satisfaction! I'm trying not to get upset at Derek for interrupting, because I know you said he won't be like that evil witch...lol! Anyway, it's still a great story and this was another good update that showed another aspect of their relationship.
Good luck with your exams and update when you can. :)
Ugh (head desk) poor G & C can't get any satisfaction! I'm trying not to get upset at Derek for interrupting, because I know you said he won't be like that evil witch...lol! Anyway, it's still a great story and this was another good update that showed another aspect of their relationship.
Good luck with your exams and update when you can. :)
5/8/2009 c2 kepteinen
I love you, but there's some tense mistakes in this chapter; you switch between present and past tense. I could correct it if you like? :D I've got this weekend off, and my fingers are itching for something to do.
I love you, but there's some tense mistakes in this chapter; you switch between present and past tense. I could correct it if you like? :D I've got this weekend off, and my fingers are itching for something to do.
5/8/2009 c2 knits alot
I'm really glad you keep updating. This is an addicting story. I don't hate Dereck, I just don't want him to become an issue. I don't think I'd be interested in a guy whose brother impersonated him. But maybe Dereck thinks its hot, lol. It's hard to see Garen with such doubts. I know it can't all be smooth sailing.
I'm really glad you keep updating. This is an addicting story. I don't hate Dereck, I just don't want him to become an issue. I don't think I'd be interested in a guy whose brother impersonated him. But maybe Dereck thinks its hot, lol. It's hard to see Garen with such doubts. I know it can't all be smooth sailing.
5/8/2009 c2 xSadistxFujix
Uh oh, this is going to create some more problems, I just know it. I loved this chapter! Poor Garen and his sex-driven self. Can't wait more the next chapter!
Uh oh, this is going to create some more problems, I just know it. I loved this chapter! Poor Garen and his sex-driven self. Can't wait more the next chapter!
5/4/2009 c1 10zomgnessa
I think this is a good start to a sequel. But I'm sure if someone just read this with out reading sbppoas they would be totally lost. This was the best birthday present ever. Finally getting online to check things and I see that you put this up. =D
10zomgnessaI think this is a good start to a sequel. But I'm sure if someone just read this with out reading sbppoas they would be totally lost. This was the best birthday present ever. Finally getting online to check things and I see that you put this up. =D
5/2/2009 c1 2Rae Simmons
Aw... Well I still like Derek. It seemed a bit short though, not quite as exciting as I expected.
2Rae SimmonsAw... Well I still like Derek. It seemed a bit short though, not quite as exciting as I expected.
5/1/2009 c1 2xdinoxcorex
OHMYGODILOVEDIT! Please update soon! I'm serious, that was amazing. I never would've been able to write something like that with a headache hahaha. I'm obsessed with this sequel already and now I'm just...being creepy XD
2xdinoxcorexOHMYGODILOVEDIT! Please update soon! I'm serious, that was amazing. I never would've been able to write something like that with a headache hahaha. I'm obsessed with this sequel already and now I'm just...being creepy XD