6/24/2006 c1 871no.peace.los.angeles
Eh, I don't entirely agree with your poem. And I'm not too fond of the way you wrote it. There's nothing really there to draw me in. I think maybe some rhyme (as much as I hate rhyme in poetry) would've helped this some. Keep writing! :)

2/4/2004 c1 34Nasifah
So you can't accomplish your dreams? Aw, man.