for Esperanza7/12/2020 c22 Elizabeth
I adored this, suspended everything in RL to greedily race through it. Enjoyed it even more than the Violet and the Tom. You are such a vivid, astute writer, you brought to life the landscape, the community and the beautiful repressed passions of these damaged men. Thank you but I want MORE MORE MORE
I adored this, suspended everything in RL to greedily race through it. Enjoyed it even more than the Violet and the Tom. You are such a vivid, astute writer, you brought to life the landscape, the community and the beautiful repressed passions of these damaged men. Thank you but I want MORE MORE MORE
7/13/2019 c22 Guest
Still moving this story in 2019. Please continue!
Still moving this story in 2019. Please continue!
1/22/2019 c22 Beautiful
Ughh yesss i lvoed it so much and i loved coyo description so much amazing story i hope you have more
Ughh yesss i lvoed it so much and i loved coyo description so much amazing story i hope you have more
6/11/2018 c2 Guest
Lovely work, glad I found it. Great, the way you slowly tell his past without it being too much all at once, how you keep giving him cues to remember. I love your attention for detail, too, and your description of nature and dire times. Feels very real.
-thank you!
Lovely work, glad I found it. Great, the way you slowly tell his past without it being too much all at once, how you keep giving him cues to remember. I love your attention for detail, too, and your description of nature and dire times. Feels very real.
-thank you!
1/3/2018 c22 Maylie
Great story !
Great story !
6/13/2017 c22 yaaramlm
This story, lord. Beautifully written, exciting, original, sexy... Perfection. I hope I'll get to read more from you, I've already read 'The Violet and the Tom' and thought it was incredible. Please keep writing! I know it's been a while, but you are so talented.
This story, lord. Beautifully written, exciting, original, sexy... Perfection. I hope I'll get to read more from you, I've already read 'The Violet and the Tom' and thought it was incredible. Please keep writing! I know it's been a while, but you are so talented.
3/7/2015 c22 somequirkymusings
I am in love with all of your stories *cries happily* coyo and Tesla are so immensely adorable.
I am in love with all of your stories *cries happily* coyo and Tesla are so immensely adorable.
310/20/2013 c22 Rae
Oh my gosh that was hot.
I could have killed you when I realised you killed off Estrella so Coyo would have nothing tying him to Esperanza as well as to bond them closer, but lets face it if your readers didn't want to reach out and strangle you from being so involved in the story you wrote then you'd be doing something wrong.
I remember reading your comment after the chapter with the first Coyo/Tesla masturbation scene and just wanted to say: you were worried about it being abrupt and a bit jerky, like seperate movements that have been connected together and it was but it worked. It definitely adds to the story rather than detracts from it - makes the perspective much closer to Tesla's since events can feel like that when you're disoriented and confused.
Oh my gosh that was hot.
I could have killed you when I realised you killed off Estrella so Coyo would have nothing tying him to Esperanza as well as to bond them closer, but lets face it if your readers didn't want to reach out and strangle you from being so involved in the story you wrote then you'd be doing something wrong.
I remember reading your comment after the chapter with the first Coyo/Tesla masturbation scene and just wanted to say: you were worried about it being abrupt and a bit jerky, like seperate movements that have been connected together and it was but it worked. It definitely adds to the story rather than detracts from it - makes the perspective much closer to Tesla's since events can feel like that when you're disoriented and confused.
6/23/2013 c22 Crepes
You are so talented. I can't believe I finished it. The pacing was expertly done! I didn't feel like the story was going too slow or too fast, but just how it should be. Thank you so so so so so much!
You are so talented. I can't believe I finished it. The pacing was expertly done! I didn't feel like the story was going too slow or too fast, but just how it should be. Thank you so so so so so much!
5/25/2013 c3 divalcious
Bastante means a lot or more than enough. Basta means that's enough. I think that might be the word u meant.
Bastante means a lot or more than enough. Basta means that's enough. I think that might be the word u meant.
4/21/2013 c14 Kaylin
I don't normally review partway through a story, but I just had to on this chapter. One particular bit just sounded like something I've always thought, but never heard anyone else say: Tesla's thoughts about love and hate. Thank you for that, even if you don't believe it yourself.
I don't normally review partway through a story, but I just had to on this chapter. One particular bit just sounded like something I've always thought, but never heard anyone else say: Tesla's thoughts about love and hate. Thank you for that, even if you don't believe it yourself.