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9/6/2009 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
I liked how personal this poem felt. It was lyrical, and also had a lot of the same feel as a diary entry. I particularly loved your closing: ‘(Whispers) in my ballet shoes with you’ the idea of whispering made the conclusion feel soft and organic, and I liked the repetition of continually going back to the ballet shoes. Keep up the good work.

Much love,

Juliet.

Jules, via the Review Marathon (links in my profile)

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