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8/9/2009 c1 2dragonflydreamer
Aw, cute, haha!

I love when authors put really old works up on this site. They're always so cute and innocent, and of course shows some major improvements in the author's work.

Nice rhyme in this. I don't think many third graders could get a rhyme scheme that smoothly.

Nice piece. It made me smile :)

~Sparkles from the Review Marathon (link in profile)
5/8/2009 c1 5blackberrycobbler
haha, that last line took me by surprise. that's good i like it.
5/6/2009 c1 81BedHead-RedHead
aaw! loved it! even though there's a dramatic change between this and your current poems, you still keep a consistant meter, even when you were a kid! that's awsum :)
5/3/2009 c1 16maple the wacky tree
at first i was like, "what the crap? this isn't like her at all." but then i read your A/N and i was like "aw!" i wish i had kept some of my poetry i wrote when i was a little kid. but i'd probably look back on it now and laugh at how stupid i was. i used to be terrible at writing poetry.

. . . actually, i still kinda am. *sigh*
5/3/2009 c1 5Maplewing
Aww, haha! See, even in third grade you were a poet! I like this, and it's actually pretty creative for a little kid.

PS- You changed your name! I like this one a lot. :D

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