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8/16/2009 c1 smilefornoreason
That was...eerie. I loved it.
5/4/2009 c1 1k+Faithless Juliet
I liked this, it's not that bad. I think you could have gone deeper within yourself but that's never an easy thing to do.

It's best to not say that this isn't your best work, simply because others will not want to read or review it. Just a sugestion. Keep up the good work.

Much love,

Juliet.
5/4/2009 c1 50risaisis
It was a really good poem, I liked it. I like when lines follow each other with the same scheme like how you did "Beat me / Hurt me / Blind me", obviously its a great technique. You already knew that though, lol. xDD

This is actually a really good subject for a poem.

Not much else that I can think of, but if I do I'll let you know! :)

-xx

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