for Such a Sweet Talker3/7/2011 c1 
3selahandsong
This was so cute! Well done! :D I did notice a few grammar and spelling mistakes though.
Anyways, it was awesome! Keep up the great job! :D
3selahandsongThis was so cute! Well done! :D I did notice a few grammar and spelling mistakes though.
Anyways, it was awesome! Keep up the great job! :D
12/2/2010 c1 6Masquerade hide your face
This was really cute. I wish I could hear more about this couple.
6Masquerade hide your faceThis was really cute. I wish I could hear more about this couple.
8/7/2009 c1 Sarah Francise
You should write a sequel!
You should write a sequel!
7/7/2009 c1 5The Perfect Verse
I really love how the main character doesn't have a perfect body but has a really nice personality. This was really cute!
5The Perfect VerseI really love how the main character doesn't have a perfect body but has a really nice personality. This was really cute!
7/6/2009 c1 49Pinkamoo
Aw you're brilliant at one shots seriously. She was a very cool character, too, and obviously - he was really cute ;)
I get what you mean about the one shots. Makes me feel less lazy too!
49PinkamooAw you're brilliant at one shots seriously. She was a very cool character, too, and obviously - he was really cute ;)
I get what you mean about the one shots. Makes me feel less lazy too!
7/2/2009 c1 8ChocolateIsMyDrug
Very cute - I'm smiling so much my cheek muscles hurt now, but in a good way! Well-written, lovable characters, all in all, an A-grade one-shot!
8ChocolateIsMyDrugVery cute - I'm smiling so much my cheek muscles hurt now, but in a good way! Well-written, lovable characters, all in all, an A-grade one-shot!
6/30/2009 c1 9Lily Llynn
Okay I love how she's a girl with some junk in the trunk instead of "oh-I'm-not-super-skinny-but-I'm-still-skinny." However, the writing felt a little unpolished and I felt it could've flowed better and sounded less cliche, at points. This was really cute, though, and I'm glad xoxluurve added this to our c2. (:
9Lily LlynnOkay I love how she's a girl with some junk in the trunk instead of "oh-I'm-not-super-skinny-but-I'm-still-skinny." However, the writing felt a little unpolished and I felt it could've flowed better and sounded less cliche, at points. This was really cute, though, and I'm glad xoxluurve added this to our c2. (:
6/29/2009 c1 10balloonfista
Very cute...it's great...and I also liked the fact that you made the sister nice and not bitchy.
Keep it up!
Ri
10balloonfistaVery cute...it's great...and I also liked the fact that you made the sister nice and not bitchy.
Keep it up!
Ri
5/4/2009 c1 2MiZZ SaHurr
Wow. This made me cry because Mia is exactly like me, in every way. But I think it's super cute:) Great job!
2MiZZ SaHurrWow. This made me cry because Mia is exactly like me, in every way. But I think it's super cute:) Great job!