for Such a Sweet Talker5/4/2009 c1 Bio
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5/4/2009 c1 jayysostunnaaa
Wow, I thought that was absolutely great. & the cutest thing in the world, I loved it. Keep up the great work. (:
Wow, I thought that was absolutely great. & the cutest thing in the world, I loved it. Keep up the great work. (:
5/4/2009 c1 
12Miss Mysteries
Great one-shot. I liked the characters. The storyline was great, it was really different to other storylines that ii've read which made it really intriguing.
12Miss MysteriesGreat one-shot. I liked the characters. The storyline was great, it was really different to other storylines that ii've read which made it really intriguing.
5/4/2009 c1 1K.M.C.N
waw...this is the first review I have ever given anyone on Fiction Press...woot woot! ^^
Well, this was actually also the first story I have fully read on FP...and I liked it. :) Youve got a good vocabulary and a nice sense of setting, so I really liked the structure and style of the fic.
I liked the characters too...they were simple and realistic, yet intrigueing at the same time. I especially liked how Ron seemed to be more unique than most young men...he was still playful, yet honest...which made him extra HOT along side his apperance XD
I was quite fond of the dialogue too; it flowed nicely and some of the quick, witty remarks were a real treat! ^^
All in all...Id say that it was a lovely little piece. I loved the essence of realism behind it, and I think you managed to convey plenty of good things that churned up interest within your readers, making them want to read the entire piece...well, at least thats how I felt! :)
Anyway, nice piece, well written and well structured with a cute little story to go with it! Made me feel happy, anyway!
~Sophia...
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1K.M.C.Nwaw...this is the first review I have ever given anyone on Fiction Press...woot woot! ^^
Well, this was actually also the first story I have fully read on FP...and I liked it. :) Youve got a good vocabulary and a nice sense of setting, so I really liked the structure and style of the fic.
I liked the characters too...they were simple and realistic, yet intrigueing at the same time. I especially liked how Ron seemed to be more unique than most young men...he was still playful, yet honest...which made him extra HOT along side his apperance XD
I was quite fond of the dialogue too; it flowed nicely and some of the quick, witty remarks were a real treat! ^^
All in all...Id say that it was a lovely little piece. I loved the essence of realism behind it, and I think you managed to convey plenty of good things that churned up interest within your readers, making them want to read the entire piece...well, at least thats how I felt! :)
Anyway, nice piece, well written and well structured with a cute little story to go with it! Made me feel happy, anyway!
~Sophia...
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