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7/9/2006 c1 62Twistedlyinsane
Sometimes I've wondered what lies past my own gate and if I just moved and never stopped what would happen. Loved this and I do want to reach the sky.
7/23/2005 c1 Magnet
Wow, that's really great.
5/30/2003 c1 6natacha
sad.. it sounds v final n sad.. but a very nice walking feeling..
10/4/2001 c1 54Werecat99
Very intence. Good work.
6/30/2001 c1 2Vincent Seyuri
This is a truly beautifu poema, only sad it's so short... Being one of those people gifted with near-death experience, I can tell you that opening the gate and passing out into whatever lies behind is warm, full of light and the most wonderous sensation you can ever achieve...
5/10/2001 c1 Carrie
Another good one! Bravissima! :o)
5/6/2001 c1 chris
i thought the story/poem was good and that everybody should see it well thats all that i can think of

signed chris
5/6/2001 c1 Amanda
::is speechless:: That is absolutely beautiful. I don't know what to say. You are quite talented. This piece is perfect, it's just wonderful. I enjoyed it very much and I will be sure to read any other works of yours. Actually, I'm jealous because I wish I had that kind of skill. You have truly *moved* me.
5/6/2001 c1 Becky Thompson
i love your poem. It is very well writen.
4/27/2001 c1 happyhornyseal
That was good! ^_^ I like that one! Laterz

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