for Guitar Strings10/10/2011 c1 
7DontWaitUpForMe
I could cry. This is the truth about human nature. We don't care about the weird kids. Only some of us do. This was amazing.
7DontWaitUpForMeI could cry. This is the truth about human nature. We don't care about the weird kids. Only some of us do. This was amazing.
6/24/2009 c1 5carefullyironic
I really loved the tone of this story, there was something almost fantastical about it. You managed to make it feel light and airy but hold a lot of emotion at the same time. Not giving the main characters names (haha if you did and somehow i missed it, ignore this comment) made it feel more anonymous and mysterious, which fit well with the tone. The boy seemed so cute and sweet :D At certain places the writing felt like it could have been a little smoother but overall I really enjoyed it and thought it was very well done!
-carefullyironic
I'm gonna be shameless here and tell you that if you haven't read Casey and Adrian I'd suggest it, personally I think it's a lot better than Someday Soon. :D
5carefullyironicI really loved the tone of this story, there was something almost fantastical about it. You managed to make it feel light and airy but hold a lot of emotion at the same time. Not giving the main characters names (haha if you did and somehow i missed it, ignore this comment) made it feel more anonymous and mysterious, which fit well with the tone. The boy seemed so cute and sweet :D At certain places the writing felt like it could have been a little smoother but overall I really enjoyed it and thought it was very well done!
-carefullyironic
I'm gonna be shameless here and tell you that if you haven't read Casey and Adrian I'd suggest it, personally I think it's a lot better than Someday Soon. :D
5/8/2009 c1 5belisha
oh wow. its not often you find such a well written, emotionally captivating story on fp, but wow...
5belishaoh wow. its not often you find such a well written, emotionally captivating story on fp, but wow...
5/6/2009 c1 11Torn and Tattered
Oh. My. God. I LOVE this one-shot. It just had a certain ringing that made me love it. The constant past reflective perspective kept it moving forward, at a constant pace. I absolutely adored the way the characters presented themselves … without your direct intervention, to say. So favorite-d.
11Torn and TatteredOh. My. God. I LOVE this one-shot. It just had a certain ringing that made me love it. The constant past reflective perspective kept it moving forward, at a constant pace. I absolutely adored the way the characters presented themselves … without your direct intervention, to say. So favorite-d.
5/5/2009 c1 1awdkljgbekrng
SO BEAUTIFUL!
ahh, it makes me want to cry.
and thats saying something, because i don't cry easily.
i love it so much.
1awdkljgbekrngSO BEAUTIFUL!
ahh, it makes me want to cry.
and thats saying something, because i don't cry easily.
i love it so much.